MeNobody14 (2013-07-06 16:35:08)

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^I concur. If you don't have proper english, (Capitalization, punctuation, etc.) then you do not belong in the creepypasta forum.

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-06 18:50:31)

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^#Sarcasm

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-07 07:08:26)

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1. Not scary
2. You've ripped this straight from the Creepypasta wiki I've read it before.

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NintendoDude (2013-07-07 16:33:50)

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You didn't make this...

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chriz (2013-07-07 19:20:18)

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hmmmm

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Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-07 20:59:59)

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0.0/10.10 Wow. This is it's own level of crappiness. Sorry to be harsh but, EVERY Jeff The Killer story is the same. Your grammar is really bad and the only scary thing about this story is that it is horribly written and done.

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PaRappa_Rappa (2013-07-07 22:53:49)

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Pretty bad, no grammar. Stale. Stay away from creepypasta

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KasaneTeto (2013-07-15 17:17:02)

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Close request

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-18 15:47:53)

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Lawl. I laugh at how you to go to together. Like, hmm..

Ketchup and mustard?

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-18 18:20:38)

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I've been wondering something:


Where's the third stooge?

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-18 22:35:45)

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Hmm.. Two, not three.. The Marx brothers, perhaps?

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-19 00:57:01)

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Ah! I've got it! Beavus and Butthead!

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-19 15:12:10)

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*GHASPERMAGERDNESS* They couldn't possibly hope to summon the power of editing!

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-19 16:31:00)

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^Yeah. You aren't much better.

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PaRappa_Rappa (2013-07-19 22:25:32)

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This sucks so bad it is mind boggling.

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