frazertim (2013-08-09 13:17:57)

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Wonderfull spill of your imaginance! But, it can be only rated below 8.5 out of 10! I found that some detail wasn't as string as others, and if you have anything against that: I meant no offence throughout the review. It would be great if you tensified some scenes, maybe even over exaggerate the merest belongings on the scene!

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-09 14:46:40)

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^That sounds intelligent, but you Misspelled "Offense", "Intensified", and "Stirring" (?).

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2013-08-10 19:01:26

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frazertim (2013-08-10 11:24:55)

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I am not great of a speller ( Thank you! ). "detail wasn't as string" I meant, "strong", but my keyboard always wants to fix my current word, with another word.

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2013-08-10 18:32:44

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-10 12:02:10)

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^IOS user? Anyways, I know how you feel.

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-11 11:35:58)

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^Duh.. I don't know what to put in next..

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SmileyFace (2013-08-24 12:48:52)

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This story is scary...And I just don't get why they seem happy. But You have good punctuality, and good imagination. =p And those are both excellent in a story.

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-25 00:05:17)

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Thanks.

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