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MSK (2014-08-21 23:21:18)turd @gwadhydra
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
Jason2k14 (2014-08-21 23:48:41)You saying you're in 12th grade with poor grammar, and a poor beginning to a Chapter or two? Yeah, and I thought I was the dumb one considering I'm only entering 9th Grade.
"gwadhydra"
>name's GawdHydra
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ConnorRonnoc (2014-08-22 16:34:01)Check out the last post of the first page.
"noo"
You know who this guy reminds me of? That donkey from Family Guy.
bite za dusto
Jason2k14 (2014-08-22 21:05:24)You're saying MSK's Chapter one was good?
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
.........!!
!You're obviously not very well-educated.
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MSK (2014-08-26 11:54:52)this is why i don't like my own kind because they are all jerk -0- how would u guys like it if i make fun of u -0- if u don't have any thing nice to say then STFU
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
Jason2k14 (2014-08-26 12:39:39)@MSK Make fun of us and we'll make fun of you back.
And lemme tell you something.
If your story doesn't exactly fit into the "one of the best stories ever", then don't post it. Re-read it, do your teachers not tell you that? You must be in 3rd grade.
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kblackeagle (2014-08-27 21:01:15)The story lacks a lot of description. It's quite bland and, honestly, the grammar is terrible. The other people are right, but they are quite rude about it.
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
MSK (2014-08-28 19:03:27)thank u for saying it in a nice way kblackeagle and i will fix it
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A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
MSK (2014-08-28 19:05:48)@jason stfu im tired of u fricking mouth
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
MeNobody14 (2014-08-28 21:47:05)And the rest of us are tired of your horrendous spelling.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MSK (2014-08-29 17:44:27)I HAVE GOOD SPELLING @MeNoboy14
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
Jason2k14 (2014-08-29 18:59:07)MSK, this is the internet. We're on 3DSPlaza, so we interact with text. My mouth is closed actually. And no you do not have good spelling. Not even close. Even my brother has much better spelling than you, and he has not even reached Middle School yet. Sad kid, go drink your tears.
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