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Started by AntiChrist
(2014-09-28 20:45:53)
AntiChrist (2014-10-06 10:14:33)
I thought about giving an enemy the moce fissure to make things interesting. Not many enemys are really going to show up until the second arch though.
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-06 21:40:32)
We need some more users to join this so they can be the rebellious pokemon.

Opinions?

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little5 (2014-10-07 00:28:16)
breed pokes with good IVs with others who have good IVs and get a pokemon with 6IVs to protect me
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-07 00:48:59)
I'm curious when my son joins in.
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AntiChrist (2014-10-07 03:15:07)
Fluxer has already been in but hasn't gotten enough lines. Anyway, I won't be posting a chapter today. I need to clear my head of any distractions because of exams. I anticipate I'll be posting the next chapters on Wednsday. .
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-07 21:39:05)
KK.
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carlos11 (2014-10-08 01:03:42)
I can pass on my good IVs by breeding with the females in the population. It's for the greater good.
Language is a tool for efficient communication. The internet is a tool for fast communication. Do not defy both intents by posting incoherent writing.
HanShotFirst (2014-10-08 01:54:45)
>6IVs make you good
>Forgetting that the true difference is in EV training and Natures.

Have fun with your Hidden Power Dark kiddos, I'll be using something useful, like Grass, Ice, Rock or Fire. Ground is a maybe as well.
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
Nutsy (2014-10-08 12:08:53)
Can Gallade learn moves of that type?
carlos11: Han, you're forgetting that, although EVs may have a more significant impact on any one stat than IVs, EVs can be changed at any given time while IVs cannot. Yes, a hindering nature may be a crippling nature, but only to a lesser extent if you have perfect IVs and the right EVs.



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HanShotFirst (2014-10-09 23:42:12)
>Not having your hindering nature affect your useless stat, which also has a low IV score, as no one will ever, in the right mind, bother with Special Attacking Weavile.

>Since the Golurk in Question, alongside the story, follows Anime/Manga logic, The IV thing is a moot point anyway, as it signifies Golurk has perfect-all around potential, but in practice, Golurk is still a crappy special attacker and is a slow, bulky clay robot.

>Literally anyone losing to a giant clay robot that's clumsy as hell and incredibly slow.

Personally, I'd just run Psycho Cut, Night Slash, and Leaf Blade as offensive options.

Assuming the 4 move rule is thrown out the window because Anime/Manga logic being prevalent here, Destiny Bond, Bulk Up, and Misty Terrain as support options.

Bulk Up, Night Slash, Psycho Cut, Leaf Blade otherwise.
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-11 03:45:37)
"Wednesday" > Friday.
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AntiChrist (2014-10-11 09:10:13)
Man, I sure am good at breaking promises. I will post the next chapter (for real this time) in ten minutes
AntiChrist (2014-10-11 10:00:02)
Chapter 8:

Carlo11s plan was to have a crowbat use meanlook and toxic spikes, while another uses protect to keep the golurk from hurting crowbat or the guy protecting him. The golurk won't be able to escape while being slowly poisned until he is defeated. Just in case, there will also be a pokemon that knows flail be protected by another pokemon while another who knows false swipe attacks him until his flail attack can't become more powerful.

Dedenne approved of this plan and also decided to trai Meia himself so she'd be able to defend herself when attacked by golurk.

Meanwhile, me, fluxercry, kishy and Dimentia got a call from victor. By "call", I mean cr1tikal helped him contact us using telepathy. Apparently two water type pokemon and one fire type had gone and destroyed someones house and the ones who did it were now running through the woods. When we got to the area behind the house, we could see one of the walls way off in the distance behind the woods.

"They're going to be forced to turn and go either left or right because of the wall. Where should we wait for them at?"

Said kishy

There was an obstacle blocking both paths the culprit could take. One the left, there was a lake. Over to the right there was a huge ditch. Since there were two water types, it seemed more likely that they'd go to across the lake. There was still no way to be sure though.

"I'll teleport some of us to the lake and some of us to the ditch. "

I said. Me amd fluxer were at the lake. I could feel three people comming. Two water types and a fire type.

"I think they are about to come. Get ready."

When they got close, they started to move slowly, then suddenly a tentacrool jumped out and used mean look on fluxer. I couldn't just leave him here to take on all three on his own, so I told kishy and dimentia to come quickly because I couldn't teleport them here.

Two more pokemon walked over to where we were. A quilfish and a blaziken. The blaziken smiled at us.

"I recognise you two. You're part of victors little "police force". You know, it's actually you people enforcing Dedennes 'laws' that are breaking the rules. You are the one who should be banned."

Said the blaziken

"There are no more bans. Inside these walls, either you follow his rules or we won't help you. You can't stay inside the walls unless you follow the rules. "

Said Fluxer

"No, Dedenne was never a mod. He can't make rules. "

"This isn't 3dsplaza anymore! You are given food and shelter here as long as you do an easy job for just a few hours a day like everyone else. If you don't want to stay here, you can leave. The rules here are different."

Said fluxer

"You think that just because robdeprop died, the rules changed now? NO! They stay the same no matter what! The mods are supposed to be the one's in control! They own these walls and everything inside them!"

Said blaziken.

"It looks like we're going to have to agree to disagree then, because clearly you refuse to listen to reason."

I said. I then teleported right behind blaziken and stunned him with the tazor. The tentacrool quickly knocked me to the ground. The quilfish used pin missle on me, but flux used leaf blade and broke all the missles, then used razor leaf. The quildifsh dodged them all and used bubble beam. I used phsycic on the bubbles, spreading them out as much as I could. The bubbles went all over the place, hitting everyone including me and flux. They explosions caused a bunch of smoke. When it cleared, the blaziken was now standing behind flux. He had recovered from the stunning pretty quickly. The blazikem kicked flux to the ground then used flame burst. I teleported next to flux and used light screen to protect him. The flame burst broke it easily. Flux jumped up and used razor leaf on the blaziken while tentacrool grabbed me and started using drain.

The quilfish used pin missle to destroy fluxers attack. The blaziken then used flair blitz on him but thankfully, flux was able to barely dodge it several times.

"AC, I could use a little help here..."

He said as both quilfish and blaziken attacked him. I was unable to do much. One of the tentacles were choking me too hard and I didn't have enough energy to use teleport again. I used phsycic on his tentacles but I could only barely loosen the tight grip. The tentacrool smiled at me in a very unsettling way.

"What a cute little runt. I might have a little fun with this one before killing it."

Said the tentacrool

"I'm a dude!"

I tried to yell, but I was being choked too hard.

"Brandon, are you ok?"

Yelled fluxer before getting smacked to the ground by the blazikens fire punch. Flux was getting angry now. He jumped up and socked the blaziken right in the face repeatedly. The quilfish slammed himself into him and pushed flux to the ground once again. Flux was now poisned because of quilfishs ability.

I now had an idea. I used telepathy to speak to the tentacrool.

"Please don't poison me..."

Naturally, the perverted moron did poison me and he too was suddenly poisoned.

"What the hell just happened!"

Yelled the tentacrool, his grip becomming weaker. I ripped his tentacool off my neck.

"Synchronise, my ability passes on my poisoning to you. By the way, I am a male ralts. "

I tazed him in the stomach and was freed from his grip as he screamed in pain. I struggled to get up. I tried using recover but the poisoning was making it a lost cause. I pulled out my gun. I didn't want to used it, but Dimentia and kishy still had a long way to go in order to reach us.

"AntiChrist, listen. You can teleport away and get to a hospital. I'll probably be fine."

Naturally, I disregarded that statement completely and aimed my gun at tentacool, still squirming around on the ground in shock.

"Let us go, or I will shoot."

The blaziken laughed.

"That should be our line, considering you guys are playing cops. It seems like you're the one in a desperate situation now. You know why? It's because we were right all along. The mods will be in control once again. That's the way it should be."

Said the blaziken.

(To be continued...)



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little5 (2014-10-11 12:22:59)
Suspense suspense
AntiChrist (2014-10-11 14:16:55)
Hey Meia, I'm planning to have your character play a somewhat large role in the second arch, but I'm not exactly sure if I'll get your personality right. How do you usually act under pressure, extremely angry, and when/if you suddenly get attacked by a friend of yours (do you hesitate to fight back, retaliate immediately or...)

I'm going to ask tons of people tons of questions
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