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I was pretty sure flail was a water type move. Also, golurk isn't a poison type or a steel type. He is a ground and ghost type.
Nutsy (2014-10-11 15:44:13)Exactly. A normal type move wouldn't hit Golurk, and Tentacrool was poisoned.
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Oh yeah, I was completely aware tentacrool was a poison type. I just didn't care. ^-^
I'll go ahead and post chapter 9 now
Cheptur noin:
"Do you not care if I shoot this guy?"
I asked the blaziken. He didn't respond. He just stood there with a smug look on his face while using flame charge over and over again. He didn't move while using flame charge, he just stood there. Was that a nervous habit maybe? Je continued cloaking himself in flames several times while quilfish kept flux occupied. I noticed that quilfish was now attacking more vicously. Why though? Something seemed off. I tried reading his mind.
"I just gotta keep him away from blaziken for a few more seconds!"
Said the quilfish enthusiastically inside his mind. Wait... What?
"I haven't properly introduced myself."
Said the blaziken calmly. It was clear that he wasn't bluffing. He had a plan he was confident in. I may or not have been ready for it. Flame charge... Why that particular move. If I were in his position... To save tentacrool....
"My name is bruce... And I'm the one who's going to overthrow Dedenne. "
Right as he finished his sentence, I figured out was his plan was, but at the same time he moved with great speed and knocked me unconsious. During that time, however, I teleported all my weapons away from me. It was now up to fluxer until dimentia and kishy came.
While I was unconsious, I proceeded to watch from inside my mind, Bruce and quilfish mercilessly toss around Flux. I was like a ghost. Floating around outside my body.
"Fluxer, can you hear me? All you have to do is defeat tentacrool. The meanlook will wear off and you will be able to run away."
I told him
"I hear you, Brandon."
Fluxercry quickly jumped up and used vine whip on the tentacrool. Tentacrool was now defeated. Flux ran like hell. The quilfish used aqua ring and put it around tentacrool to heal him. Meanwhile, blaziken dashed after flux, crashing into trees very hard because he was now too fast to control his movement well. Bruce stopped and thought for a minute, then got an idea. He anticipated the direction flux was headed, then went 500 feet from where he was. He then used fire spin multiple times, creating a huge wall of fiery tornadoes where the battle was taking place.
Eventually, flux ran far enough to see the walls of fire blocking his path. A huge circle of fire kept flux trapped in what was now Bruce's arena.
"Brandon, was it? I know you're probably watching like a ghost right now, being a phsycic type and all, but I'm far more clever than you are and there's no strategy you can use to outsmart me. "
Said bruce. Challenge accepted. I felt tentacrool healing and quilfish leaving to go find fluxer. It was only a matter of time before he was found and killed. I had another idea. I went inside quilfishs' head and made the voice in my head sound like Bruce's voice.
"Quilfish, this is bruce. Don't ask how I'm able to speak to you telepathically. I'll explain later. I just need you to use the move rain dance. Hurry."
I said to him using bruces voice. Quilfish hesistated for a second, said "yes sir!" out lous, then finally used rain dance. When the rain came down and started putting out the fire that kept flux from escaping, I could see the stress drain from fluxers face.
"Your move, Bruce."
"Well played, Brandon. However, I don't run out of ideas that quickly."
Said Bruce. Though I hate to admit it, I was exited to see what Bruce's backup plan was. Then I noticed the rain gradually stopping. Bruce had used the move "sunny day". I wasn't sure how to feel now. The thought of losing to such an arrogant person who was only rational and clever when it came to his own personal gain was unsettling. I repeatedly told flux which direction to run so the team shouldn't find him. It became especially hard to do when the tentacrool recovered and started also looking around the woods for him. Eventually, tentacrool found my uncionsious body near the lake.
He must have forgot the fact that I'm a male, considering the scary look on his face when he saw me. He wrapped his tentacools around my little legs.
"I'm a guy. Are you sure you still want to do that?"
I said through telelathy.
"A ralts is a ralts."
He said, unfortunately.
"Kock it off, tentacrool. Don't do that."
Said Bruce as he walked toward me and tentacrool. He let go of me slowly and sighed. I have never been more thankful to be saved by an enemy. Clearly, bruce was at least somewhat moral. The quilfish came too.
"I figured out what you're doing now, Brandon my friend. You're telling the grovile which way to run so we don't find him. Not a bad idea, but considering how he asked you to save yourself earlier, I can infer he's likely to come to your rescue."
Said Bruce. I knew what was comming. Bruce yelled out "Grovile, wherever you are, we will kill your little friend here unless you come here at once." loud enough for flux to hear him. His eyes widened. Flux immediately dashed through the trees. This was the fastest I've ever seen him go. The look of determination on his face was freightening. Clearly, nothing I could say would make him turn back and save himself, even though now the walls of fire were small enough to leap over.
Dimentia amd Kishy were getting closer, but I still wasn't sure if they could make it in time. However, I knew flux was about to put up a good fight.
To be continued...
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carlos11 (2014-10-12 03:46:46)>"A ralts is a ralts"
Nice job with the rapist joke. It was so obvious, because Tentacruel has tentacles, yet I didn't see it coming.
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Pokemonbro12 (2014-10-12 05:22:34)You should have a Hypno be on Bruce's teem since Hypno seems like a child molester
Die of cancer
little5 (2014-10-12 13:29:14)You haven't seen enough Hentai to know where that was going? Shocking. @carlos11
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2014-10-12 13:38:39
Chapter ten:
Thankfully, Blazikens flame charges had worn off completely so his speed was back to normal. Now Flux actually stood a chance. A huge leaf storm came out of the forest and knocked the quilfish and tentacrool out of the way, followed by flux running strait toward Bruce. He furiously swung at him using leaf blade, Bruce backing up while he dodged them. Eventually he backed up so far he tripped over a root and began to slowly fall backward. Flux used to oppertunity to strike, but Bruces fall tyrned into a backflip and his leg went up and kicked flux in the face. Flux stumbled to the ground and the Blaziken used flame thrower on him. Flux rolled to the side to dodge it, jumped up quickly and used energy ball. Bruce was not prepared for that attack, as it hit him right in the chest, pushing him into a large boulder.
The quilfish used waterfall and slammed himself into Flux. Flux used leaf blade to block the attack, and eventually overpowered quilfish, knocking him out of the way. Tentacrool used water pulse on Flux. While he was trapped in the sphere of water, Bruce used hidden power and threw it towards flux with all his strength. Flux used leaf blade to cut his way out of the water sphere just seconds before the hidden power reached him.
Flux used bullet seed on Bruce, but bruce countered it with flame burst. The little balls of fire went right through the seeds, then collided with fluxer, knocking him back a few feet. Right as flux got to his feet, the Blaziken had already got to him and uppercut him using fire punch. Bruce then grabbed Flux by the neck and threw him against a large tree. Fluxer slowly got up. He was burnt all over the place and blood was running down his face from his forehead. He leaned back against the tree, panting.
"Where's all that strength you had a minute ago?"
Said Bruce. Had Fluxer given up? I looked for the answer inside his head.
"This arrogant bastard forgot what ability belonged to groviles. While you're over there lecturing me, Bruce, thinking you've won, I'm preparing my last attack."
Thought Fluxer
I could one of his hands behind his back. In his palm was an orb of yellow light that was collecting more and more energy. Flux was about to use solar beam. Since he had taken quite a lot of damage, his overgrow ability would make his grass type attacks even stronger. If he could collect enough energy before using solar beam, he could knock out the Blaziken with one hit.
As anticipated, Bruce started monologueing.
"This is what happens when you turn away from the authority of robdeprop. This website will one day go back to the way it should be. All the ignorant noobs and their leader Dedenne, they think they are so powerful now just because they can kill the moderators, but this corruption of power will not be tolerated. I will bring this intire hole you call 'the state' to its' demise and everyone who was arrogant enough to believe that they were better than our REAL leaders will learn a lesson they'll never forget."
Said Bruce
"You think you're some sort of superhero or something... Do you think you're going to become a mod after all this, just because you think the mods are still in control? 3dsplaza is not going to go back to the way it is! When will you realize this! Nobody is trying to 'overthrow' robdeprop. We are just building a safe place where everyone can have a home. Sure, it isn't going to be perfect for every-"
I tried to tell Bruce telepathically, but he interrupted, continuing his speech about how "evil" Dedenne is for "inslaving" the people who were only "doing what was right". It was clear that he saw this whole situation as a "noobs vs moderators" war. He just refused to see the bigger picture.
Fluxers solar beam was now as powerful as he could make it. He couldn't store any more energy.
"You know what Bruce... I think I understand you just fine."
Said Flux.
"....You do? Pfft. I bet you're only pretending you've really learned anything because you realize now th-"
"You think you're special."
Interrupted Flux.
"You think that anyone who disagrees with you is the 'bad guy', you're childish enough to murder without feeling any remorse, just because people want to build a home in the state, a place where they can be safe, even if it means following different rules than the ones robdeprop wanted us to live by. You think that a little change, just a small amount is pure evil and automatically justifies murder."
Flux continued. His voice was starting to raise a little bit.
"Oh, so you're saying thay disobeying the rules for your own personal gai-"
Bruce tried to say, but was once again interrupted.
"No! Not everyone hatched a powerful pokemon like you! Not everyone is able to defend themselvs without any help! If you really think that wanting to survive is no good reason to follow different rules than there were before, even if it doesn't affect anyone in a negative way, then you're out of your god damn mind!"
Yelled Fluxer right as he unleashed all his rage into a gigantic solar beam. Bruce quickly used blast burn to try and counter it, but it overpowered him after only a few seconds and knocked him all the way into the lake. Now that he was in there, his fire power was weakened. Fluxer fell over, breathing hard. He was now completely out of energy.
The quilfish and tentacrool didn't dare go near him, but jumped into the lake. After a few seconds, the pulled Bruce out by the arms. Bruce still seemed to have enough energy to kill fluxer when he got up. He used flair blits to dry off, and this time his flames were white. They were even more powerful now, thanks to the blaze ability.
He planned to use overheat. The fact that overheat was extremely powerful when used the first time, combined with the blaze ability, combined with the move sunny day would be enougj to tear fluxers body into shreads. I tried desperately to wake myself up. This was the most infuriating thing I ever seen.
"You're really going to get it now you bastard..."
Said Bruce. He unleashed the overheat. A humongous beam of white flames came towards flux really quickly. Flux could only watch it comming towards him. He was too weak to get up. Because of the flames, the area was too bright for me to see much, but something grabbed flux and quickly pulled him out of the way. The flames tore through thousands of trees then finally hit a large rock and made an explosion too large for even a micheal bay movie.
The figure that took fluxer leaped up a tall tree and gently set him down on a sturdy branch. It was Dimentia. Dimentia jumped down right infront of Bruce and glared at him.
The quilfish quickly used pin missle on Dimentia, but he didn't move a muscle. Kishy appeared out of nowhere and deflected all the pin missles with her swords. They bounced back and hit the quilfish. Both kishy and Dimentia....looked pissed.
To be continued...
2014-10-12 17:54:58
Nutsy (2014-10-12 18:02:36)"-made an explosion too large for even a Michael Bay movie."
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carlos11 (2014-10-12 22:25:24)Kish has swords?
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It's only fair since wigglytuff doesn't really have a very diverse moveset. Also, kishy using swords as a weapon just makes sense in my head.
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Did type match-ups disappear? Carlos' plan involved using Flail, a normal type move on a ghost type Pokémon, and poison types can't be poisoned.
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