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carlos11 (2014-10-13 02:42:54)Lol, like that's ever gonna happen.
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Nutsy (2014-10-13 03:42:47)No ending?
Deck sweg gravy.
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little5 (2014-10-13 12:54:32)Kishy should be more of a person who heals/protects the team (what are they called in Final Fantasy? Mages?) because of her high HP and moves. Like Heal Bell.
That's a pretty good idea. I'll have Kishy be the medic.
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Chapter 11:
Dimentia used bone rush. He summoned a large bone shaped staff made of aura and swung it at Bruce with great speed. Bruce struggles to dodge the attacks, but eventually got hit right in the stomach, knocking him back fifeteen feet away from Dimentia. Bruce quickly jumped to his feet and used flame burst. Dimentia ran towards Bruce while deflecting all the balls of flames out of the way with his bone staff. Bruce used blaze kick and broke the bone staff in half. He then used fire punch several times. Dimentia took two hits, dodged the rest and used force palm. Bruce was pushed up into the air and landed in the lake.
Meanwhile, the quillfish was using iron tail while Kishy used her swords. The swords couldn't cut through his tail, so the quillfish used his tail as a sword to fight off Kishy. The tentacruel used water fall and charged at Kishy. Kishy used hidden power while still holding of quillfish and defeated the tentacruel in one hit. The quillfish started getting tired and slowing down. Finally, Kishy moved in a put a huge slash across the quilfishs chest. The quilfish squealed in pain as it started the bleed out.
The Blaziken jumped out of the water and used flame thrower. His blaze ability was now making him as powerfull as he could be. Dimentia used aura sphere and it collided with the flame thrower, causing and explosion. Bruce and Dimentia both used close combat on each other. Dimentia, having more energy beat the living crap out of the Blaziken.
"It's no use... I don't have the power to beat both of you. However, don't think this is over!"
Yelled Bruce as he used flame charge and ran towards the lake.
"Do you intend to swim away?"
Joked Dimentia. The Blaziken ran so fast, he was able to run accross the top of the water like Jesus by repeatedly using flame charge.
"This isn't over!"
He repeated. I couldn't believe my eyes. Dimentia used aura sphere over and over again, trying to knock down Bruce while he ran away, but Bruce dodged all of the spheres. He had used flame charge about eight times now and was going way too fast. Kishy used swift. The stars went almost the speed of sound while catching up to the Blaziken. When they hit Bruce's leg, he face planted, summersalted about twenty times, then bounced across the water the way a flat stone would if you threw it in the water the right way. Finally, he lost the momentum the stay above the water and sunk.
I thought we had got him, but he immediately used flair blitz and started to butterfly stroke across the lake like a maniac. When Kishy used swift on him again, the stars couldn't get to Bruce without burning up in the flames around him. When he got across the lake, he continued to run into the distance and nobody was able to find him after that.
When we got to the police station, we reported to Victor what happened. Victor sent a search party to go find Bruce, but nobody could find him. He was still on the lose, ready to strike back at any moment. Meanwhile, Dimentia led Quilfish and Tentacruel to their cells. Their cells were right next to each other.
"Do you think Bruce will come back for us?"
Said the Tentacruel
"Of course he will! He'll bust us out of here in no time!"
Said the Quilfish
"Quilfish, you are going to be in here for 20 days for damaging property and resisting arrest. Tentacruel, you will be in here for 31 days for damaging property and attempted rape."
Said Dimentia. Tentacruel and Quilfish fell silent. They were surprised that Dimentia had completely disregarded their statement on how the Blaziken would be back to break them free. How could he be so calm? Was the police force really all that powerful?
On the way out, Dimentia ran into Meia.
"Hey Meia, how's your training comming along?"
"Pretty good. I'm probably going to evolve into a sylveon since I'm being exposed to so much fairy type power every day now. "
"I heard Carlos11 left the walls to wander around so the golurk wouldn't come to this place. Is that true?"
"I think so. I haven't seen him in the tower since the meeting."
Meanwhile, Nutsy was outside collecting berries. He saw something shiny sticking out of the ground. He pulled it out and washed it off.
"No way..."
Said Nutsy. Nutsy has found a Dawn stone. He quickly ran strait to Victors office.
"Is something wrong, Nutsy?"
Said Victor
"I have something important that Dedenne might want to know about... There are items in this world now."
He held up his dawn stone. Victor was shocked.
"This could be a huge problem... "
Said Victor
To be continued...
(Chapter twelve is the last chapter of arch one)
HanShotFirst (2014-10-13 16:22:05)>"This could be a huge problem"
This is a big problem.
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
Nutsy (2014-10-13 21:26:54)Deck. I got a line.
If we do spevial moves, I'd like some sort of kickass Focus Punch. It'd have to charge up for quite some time, though.
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PhoenixDawn (2014-10-13 22:54:03)Special moves? Toxic Leaf blade.
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HanShotFirst (2014-10-13 23:24:58)There are so many creative combos given Gallade's movepool. Hold on, I gotta go jot it down before posting.
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
little5 (2014-10-14 00:45:13)Guise, I have a question..
Blaziken is a freaking fire chicken.
Birds (aquatic birds don't count) and water= Do not mix.
Fire and water= Do not mix.
Could someone please tell me why the fire can push him across the lake?
Nutsy (2014-10-14 01:28:33)His flames were so hot that it made steam and he used that to propel?
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HanShotFirst (2014-10-14 01:51:26)Same concept as Basilisk lizards. Since his bones are hollow (Bird stuff) and he was running at an incredible pace, his steps didn't break the water tension and have him plummet underneath it.
In other words, he was literally touching the surface of the water for fractions of a second at any given time as he was running across.
Basilisk lizards get a pass because they're lighter than Blaziken, so they don't have to be as fast.
Take into account this is the same Pokemon who can hop over a 30 story building with ease. Clearly he has some nice, powerful leg muscles in there.
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^ HanShotFirst just explained that for you. Also, when he started swimming and he was able to use flair blitz, he was able to be on fire in the water because his fire was so powerful due to the blaze ability.
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Hey AntiChrist how many archs are there going to be? Two? Three?