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ZWhiteKnight (2012-08-04 00:12:38)new feature if Z is at the beginning its about Zero if A is there its argos and {song name} means put on the song listed for the best experience -Z
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-08-04 04:15:18)A
*argos stands infront of his father's grave*
Argos: I'm sorry I couldn't protect you Dad but I will kill Zero to avenge your death.
*argos walks away from his home and heads to New Emerald City* *Argos sighs and sits in the back of the Starving Giant,the local tavern.*
Argos: How am I going to find Zero anyway?He could be in the underworld by now,and I can't go there without an army.
Stanger: Demons,death,and brothers oh my.
Argos: Oh my indeed...Who are you?
Stranger: Name's Soren local ex-paladin and adventurer.
Argos: Well my name is*Door slams open*
Guard: Soren you will have to come with me and my 4 friends. Soren: Well you must suck at math worst than me cause you have 3 friends with you.
Guard5: Wha-*Vanishes*
Guard1: Take him down!
*Soren is tackelled and is held down by guards 2,3,and 4*
Argos: What did he do?
Guard1: He blew up a house wifh a burst of light.
Argos: Ok so one more question; Do you want Me to lend a hand?
Guard1: I guess soo-*Guard1's left hand falls off*
Guard1: Owww!
*argos puts away his sword*
Argos: Here have this one.Now get out of here!
Gaurds1-4:Yes sir!*guards run out crying*
Soren:Thanks for the assist but those were just guard pretenters. So whats your story kid.
To be continued
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-08-09 01:37:53)school has started for me but ill still post the story
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-08-27 01:51:55)Z
Demon:Now Zero in order for you to become a demon you must share our blood so here*hands over bowl with demon blood*
Zero:I'll do what ever it takes*Drinks*
*Dark energy starts to form around Zero until he cannot be seen through the blackness;when the darkness clears Zero is an elite class demon*
Demon:Nicely done.Now what are your orders sir?
Zero:hmm*angry*Find and kill my brother Argos!
Demon:Who do you want to send?
Zero:I don't care someone strong.
Demon:Yes sir.Shall I send in the spy too?
Zero:Yes whatever just get it done.
Demon:Yes sir.*shouting to another demon*Go sent in the spy and Darcy*Demon 2 salutes and leaves*
Zero:Now remind me why your following my orders?
Demon:The ancient stone tablet says that the one that drinks demon blood and survives is ment to be the new demon king.
Zero: Ok.Now lets see what this army can do.
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-09-03 16:02:58)A
Soren: So whats your story about this brother I've heard about?
*Argos explains the death of his father and the betrayal of Zero*
Soren: So um can I slap that jerk through a wall when we meet him?
Argos
ure but I'm going to do much more damage than that.Soren:
yay!Argos: So I've told you my story whats the deal with you?
Soren:Well it all started when I was 5.Both my parents were killed by a demon girl.As I stood there with their bodies beside me I swore that I would kill as much demons as I could.So one day when I was 13 the grand master of the paladin order took me in.After I told him my story he decided for me to become a paladin.After 5 years of that the incident happened.It was a dark and stormy night and what I mistaked for a group of demons was actually a inocent family traveling.So I was stripped of my title and tossed out.So now I just wander around from city to city to find a new hope to avenge my parents.But no one will take me.
Argos:Well pack your bags cause your coming with me.
Soren:Really?
Argos:Yeah your paladin skills are going to be helpful.
Soreen:Thank you man.
Argos:No problem.
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/ ZWhiteKnight (2012-09-13 03:45:01)Shut up im workin on it
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-09-13 07:12:57)after the Next part of dfc i will be posting on a new forum menu titled dfc chapter 2 sparks of a hero
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-09-16 20:02:35)Final part 1 post before DFC chapter 2 Sparks of a hero
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Argos: So what should we do about Zero?
Soren: Well first we'd need an army so lets head over to the paladin tower I might be able to get there help but only if the writer lets me be a main character.
Argos: You are not stealing my role in this story.
Soren: But..
Argos: I will kill you with a rusty spork if you try to take my spot.
Soren: fine
Argos: Letsa go!
Soren: Argos your not mario
Argos: IDC >:3
Soren: I will get the spork out on you
Argos: Watever mom.
Soren:Lets just go so you will stop being a troll.
3 hours later after trolling
Argos: Are we there yet
Soren: no!
Argos: Are we there yet
Soren: no!!
Argos: Are we there yet
Soren: no!!
Argos: Are we there yet
Soren: if I say yes will you shut up.
Argos: Yes I will
Soren: fine we're here
Argos: No we're not >:3
Soren: I cant belive this.Writer please shut him up
Argos: We have writers!? D :
Soren: Thats the second time I've used that joke
Argos: Ik Im just bored.
?: and Im going to kill you
Soren: Argos be watchful I don't think this is another gag.
Argos: Alright.
?: enie menie minee mo one shall live and two will go.My master Zero I grant his wish Ill make sure you two are as dead as fish.
Soren: No! not her!
Argos: who?
Soren: the demon that killed my parents!
?: Oh how you are right my dear but I'm afraid your adventure ends here
Soren: Argos get ready!
Argos: Why?
Soren: 3 rymes is here way of marking her prey and I hate to say but we'rre her next victims
?: Oh Soren you were always so observent but I am merly a servant for if I fail to win Zero will send more so you'll meet your end!
Soren: Thats three *takes out myserious greatsword*
Argos: *pulls out sword* show yourself Demon!
*a little girl walks out from behind some bushes*
Argos:Hey little girl whats your name?
?: Darcie
Argos: Well you better run home there's a demon out here.
Soren: Argos move!
Argos: its just a little girl see?
Darcie: You should listen to your friend Argos >: )
*Darcie's hand turn into black claws as here eyes go pitch black as here head flips upside down upon so she opens a second mouth which is filled with sharp pointed teath*
Argos: Oh crap.
Darcie:Now come meat my firends*darcgie opens a portal and out come three demons in armor*Looks likewe're going to have a playdate.
Argos and Soren: Lets do this!
to be continued!
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-09-16 21:56:43)Now the epic conclusion from 10 minutes ago*Warning extreme vilance*
Darcie: Time to play go have fun my friends.
*the first demon does a quick lunge at Argos but Argos side steps avoiding the blade then doing 3 quick slice through the demon*
Argos: You wanna play? Then your going to have to do better than that.
*for a greater experince but on the song the world is black by someone I forgot the name of i dont own the song*
Darcie: Ok then >: ) *summons 8 more demons*
Soren: Ill take and the first have youcan get the others
Argos: whatever
*3 demons charge at soren but he ducks under the first sword flips that demon over and sticks a knife in his back.Next one lunges soren dodges gets up and breaks that demon's arm
and uses the demon's own sword to cut it in half.
The 3 demon trys to sneak up behind soren but before the demon can strike soren turns around and blasts the Demon with a light beam*
Soren: Yo did you see that they just got pwned!
Argos: yeah kinda busy here
*Argos runs up to 2 demons jumpss up in the air and land on the first demon's shoulder and sticks a kunia in his neck the flips over behind the second demon and kicks him in the back then moves around to the front of him and does and upper cut sending him into the air finally he lays his sword sticking up on the ground were the demon falls onto it.*
Darcie: Demons combine to form a giant!
Soren:: oh come on we just killed what five demons and you change the rest intoa giant?! unfair!
Darcie: Well demons dont play by your rules human we make our own.
Argos: Lets just kill this giant soren
Soren: Right!
*Argos runs around to the back of the giant and climbs along it's back while soren is sending out blasts of light at the giant*
Demon:Graa!!
Soren: Argos now!
*Argos puts his sword in the demon and slides down it's stomach cutting it*
Darcie: NO!
Soren: Yes!
*the giant demon explodes oponArgos taking his blade out*
Argos: Eww! demon guts DX
Soren: Just you and us Darcie.Give up!
Darcie: Well your wrong soren you arent in fighting condition.
Soren: Wha-*Soren is pushed back into the air by an explosion*
Soren: ughh
Argos: Soren!
Darcie: Mwha ha ha ha ha! Just you and me kid.Good bye*Darcie sends fireball at Argos*
Argos:No!
*A giant explosion erupts when the fire ball hit him leaving a small crater were Argos was standing*
Darcie: Oh well I wanted to play with him more. >: )
Soren: No...
*A wall of fire erupts from the sides of the crater clearing the dust.As the fire wall dies down a figure can be seen floating above the crater*
Darcie: Whatis this?!
Soren: WTF!
Argos: Im sorry Darcie but it's my turn to play with you now.*A giant fire ball forms over Argos's head*
Darcie: I know that at this new rate I'll lose so We'll play again some other time.Bye>*Darcie desappears*
Argos: Dang it*fire ball fizzles out ashe floats down*
Soren: I thought you were dead! How did you do that?
Argos: I honestly don't know but It will help out in our fights if I learn to control it.
Soren: Ok lets get to the paladin tower ASAP.
Argos: Lets go.
End of Chapter one
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ZWhiteKnight (2012-09-18 00:28:24)Ok I wanna give a couple shoutouts for chapter1
First goest to friend irl trenton for the idea of soren
Secondly Sammeh13 for the character darcie
And finally to all of my readers and thier support for the series
-Z
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It is the third era on the planet Xerox and humanity is in a war against the demons.For hundreds of years the two races have been at war but since the resent loss of thier ruler Lord Neferium the tide has turned in the humans favor.
But small groups of people are afraid due to an ancient stone tablet in the uzara mountains tells of a grim fate for the humans.The tablet states that when the demon lord vanishes a greater evil will emerge to destroy the humans.After that the tablet is broken and only one word is visible that word is Fire.No one knows what it means but the fear of it more than the evil.Undiscovered across the planet is the seond part of the tablet foretelling of a great secret.This is a story of betrayal,loss,and brotherhood.This is the Demon Flare Chronicles.
We begin our story on a farm where two brothers Zero and Argos are about to have their lifes changed forever."Yo Zero I wanna rematch since you beat me yesterday,"called Argos."Admit it little brother you suck.I've beaten you 15 times straight give up,"mocked his older brother."Shut up!I will kill you next time we fight!""Whatever you say Argos,"
*knock knock knock*
"Dad!"yelled Zero and Argos as the opened the door."Zero Argos I've missed you both so much,""Hey Dad is the war almost over?"questioned Argos."Yes son it is.I just wish your mom could see it.""Hey Dad are you going to be leaving again soon?"asked Zero."I'm afraaid I leave tomorrow mourning,""oh ok,"said Zero with a hint of sadness."Well its off to bed for all of us now.Good night,"
*Several hours later A loud crash awakens Zero*
"Who's there?"Zero questioned to the doorway.Suddenly a shady Demon materializes innhis room."Hello Zero.Nice to see you."said the demon."Speak quickly Demon or leave now."Zero shaked out of his throat."I only want to talk.So you've heard about the tablet in the Uzara mountains well most of us demons know a secret.To awaken the evil our king must die.But heres were your help comes.Our wise men have seen the fate of your father.He will kill the demon king therefore unleashing the evil,"explained the demon."then what does that have to do with me?"questioned Zero."Kill your father and we keep our leader and no great evil.So will you kill your father?""...Yes...I will,"answered Zero.
*in Zero's dad's room.*
*Zero pulls out a knife* "I'm sorry father,"*Zero stabs and kills his father.*"Yes! Now the evil will awaken!"Cheared the demon."Wha..."*Zero is surrounded by shadows as he transforms into a demon.* "how do you feel Zero?""Powerfull,Was my father the demon king in disguise?""Yes.Now 6ou are the most powerful being in the world.""Feels good.You know being a demon king will suit me.So when do we get starte-"*Zero is slashed agcross his right eye leaving a scar*"Zero!WHY!?Why would you do this?!Whatever the reason I will kill you!"screamed Argos.*Zero summons a blade and slashes Argos across his left eye*"Let that scars be a lesson and payback.Goodbye Argos I've got a world to destroy."*Zero and the demon vanish*"Zerooo! I WILL KILL YOU!"
To be continued