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Jason2k14 (2014-08-15 19:14:32)You gonna have to make this Chapter a little more interesting , and stop entering periods after. a. few. words. Do. you. know. what. I. am. saying?
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MSK (2014-08-17 00:46:22)im still working on it and im rewriteing it from a computer
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A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
MSK (2014-08-17 15:59:14)no its the truth
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
Jason2k14 (2014-08-17 16:32:37)So, you're telling us that you're still working on Chapter 1 although you've already uploaded like 2 sentences to your chapter and you'll rewrite after? Uh, you're sofa king dumb. Why can't you just rewrite alone?
"Chapter 1"
The new kid had stepped inside the school building. He felt as if this was the right school for him, so he stepped into many conversations with people he didn't know but they continously ignored him. The new kid was in sorrow, and ran to the back of the school building. He felt as if his new school did not suit him properly, and so he sat down on the hard ground and listened to music to drown away his unhappiness. Suddenly, he heard voices. "HEHEHE." *THUMP THUMP THUMP* "BOO!" The boy gulps as he takes off his headphones and shakes, "Wh-Who's there?"
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*SILENCE*
Whaddya think of that for a revision?
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MSK (2014-08-17 22:25:52)horrible
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
Jason2k14 (2014-08-18 03:22:16)You're jealous because you don't have enough detail into your story. What you included in your Chapter was like 3rd grade vocabulary. Like, you sofa king dumb as fork.
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MSK (2014-08-18 18:53:56)i do not have a 3rd grade vocabulary i acually have a good sense of vocabulary some people are just being to idiotic to see.
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A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
Jason2k14 (2014-08-18 19:00:43)I think we've seen enough, don't you think? Maybe you're the one being idiotic for not noticing such a terrible story. Like I said, this is also a bedtime story for little kids. Be a teacher for the little ones one day.
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MSK (2014-08-19 01:09:17)RAAAH SHUT IT IM GOOD ASK MY 20 YEAR OLD FRIEND HE SAID THAT HE LIKED IT >¦0
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
MSK (2014-08-19 16:24:37)noo
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
Jason2k14 (2014-08-19 16:37:02)Well, where is this 20 year old friend of yours? He probably is retarded enough to not understand how horrible of a Chapter you made.
@~Silon~ Nah, his 20 year old friend must've failed about 4 grades or so, just like MSK did. They're both probably in 1st grade meanwhile there are like 7 year olds that are smart as hell in College. Lmao.
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MSK (2014-08-21 00:29:46)>:0 im tired of all ur stupid insults
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
MSK (2014-08-21 00:31:49)IM IN 7 GRADE IM SMARTER THEN U JACKSON U THINK THAT UR SMART.U GUYS ARE ALL TURDS HERE ALL I AM IS TRYING TO HAVE FUN WHEN ALL U HATERS HAVE TO RUIN IT
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A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
MSK (2014-08-21 00:34:22)I HAVE MORE INTELECT THE U EVER WILL SILON.CUZ UNLIKE U I HAVE A SOUL
A true friend would risk there life fighting for you or whats right. Those who aren't true friends are always useing you for something.
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Chapter 1
There was one boy at school and he wanted to feel like he belonged as he walked in the door slam and walked over to a few people.He tried talking to a
to the few people and they wouldn't respond back. He felt like he didn't belong at the school. So he went back home and wasn't planning to go back. As he was in his room listening to music when he started to here voices through the headphones this was not normal as the music went on it got louder and louder. So he took them off and went to bed. He still heard the voices. The voices said ''go to'' he couldn't make out the rest of what they we're saying. Then he heard a door open it sounded like a soft screch so he got out and saw a red door. He said ''What the heck is this?!? Some sick joke?!?'' then he heard ''go in.'' The boy wonderd what was on the other side of the door. So he walked up to the door and opened it. It sounded like that soft screch.
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