MeNobody14 (2013-05-12 10:33:01)

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He ran. Feeling cowardly. Terrible. He ran straight through bushes, and branches, brambles and thistles. He was cut, scraped, bruised, beaten.

Alone.

He hated himself. He ran, while his gaurdian protected him. It probably cost her life. For what? A peice of garbage that wandered around. he sat on a rock and sobbed. He had no idea where Angela was. He had no idea where He was. He was lost. "It's not your fault, dear." A voice said. He turned around. Standing behind him, was his mother. "Mom?" He wondered if he was hallucinating. Maybe he had a headache and didn't know it. His mother sat and hugged him. "Shh. She told you to run, and you did." His mother said. "It isn't your fault."

He couldn't stop blaming himself. His eyes burst into flames. He was angry. Angry with himself. Angry with life. Angry at the person that did this to him. Life was playing a cruel joke, and nobody was laughing.

Next CP I do will be titled "Her."

I was thinking of doing "The She-it." But I thought I'd be banned.

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-05-12 17:40:14

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-13 08:37:43)

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^Just the end of thus segment. This was meant to be a prologue for "Jerry". And since I improved my writing during this, I'm going to rewrite that series.

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kblackeagle (2013-05-13 08:55:04)

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Wow. That was amazing.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-13 08:58:25)

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^Trolling or serious?

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-26 01:20:58)

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Okeydoke. I'm bumping this because I've decided to make a prequel. And, I've only edited out a cameo. Other than that, I'm willing to admit I'm not perfect.

Plus, I'll enjoy all the little whiners trying to find misspellings and such.

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spadeguy (2013-07-26 01:28:22)

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THANK YOU FOR BUMPING THIS! I mean it. There aren't many stories I've seen here that have this level of skill in them! Glad I didn't miss out.

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-26 02:49:15)

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This was my second attempt at a story. I'll compile all of my first ones into one thread for you guys later.

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SmileyFace (2013-08-24 14:34:28)

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Okay, Lets get down to buisness. =p I LOVED where this story was going, Him (kinda) a victim, but not really a victim, He could stand for himself but he was kinda alone. I loved it, Him not knowing who he was, and in the beginning (The very first post) when you were describing the rain, I darn near fell in love. XP But, CPs aren't really my thing, And I felt you could've went on a different track, and knocked this one outta the park. This is the most developed story Ive seen you write (So far) I still liked how you incorporated characters from other CPs stories. Reminds me of a fifth grade project I had when we had to incorporate greek gods. Anyways, I loved Angela, She seemed so cool. =p But the CPs just kinda took it to a different level, you know? To me, they're kinda just fictional. I still love how you write, tons of plot twists and surprises. On the edge of your seat stuff when I read your stories.

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-24 22:15:15)

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I never really think of my writing "Abilities" in such a perspective.

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