ConnorRonnoc (2013-08-20 17:09:27)

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Your writing is so good that I feel like I'm reading a published book when I'm reading it.

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-20 17:39:46)

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^Naw. I'm not that good.

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-08-20 20:02:38)

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^ Trust me, to me it's just that good.

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-21 02:20:49)

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^That's a high compliment. Thank you!

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-22 02:44:26)

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I've moved this to my website, so I'll continue it there.

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SmileyFace (2013-08-24 12:41:41)

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I think this is a good story. You have a hook in the beginning, You have 2 good characters, (That are both well-developed) And you have a sense of humor when you write, Gives it a vibrant touch. =p And, I like it personally, because I have a feeling these two will fall in love. Those are my kind of stories. Keep adding!

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-08-24 18:39:19)

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^^ Ooh people would care if you get hit by a bus. Not.

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-24 22:12:27)

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This got bumped? Wow.

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MeNobody14 (2013-08-29 11:37:57)

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I thanl you for bumping this, because now everyone will know that I am continuing this on my website. (As seen in the signature)

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