MadHatter (2012-05-19 18:45:35)

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I walked into the carnival grounds. Stareing around at the creepy unhuman like things. The huge metal gates behind me closed with a huge metal CLANG.
I started walking down the long blood covered concrete path. Instead of the usual carnival music, creepy Halloween music played at each game and ride. Even one of the rollar costers had a broken track over some fire and lava pit. And, you know that game with the hammer and you how to ring the bing. Well, You had to cut off someone head and see if blood splatters to the bell.
I realized I didnt be;long in tis madhouse. I turned around to run away, but got trapped. "You're staying here missy" said a fat plump boy with his smile a cut. "But.... But....." I started. The 4 looked at eachother and laughed evil-ly. "Get her!" they screamed. I screamed, jumped, and started running. They started walking towards me as if it was a music video and the lyrics were la la la-la-la-la. I ran into a house of mirrors. And this house was COVERED in mirrors. There was no more door.
Arms started pushing through the mirrors. I screamed, holding my arms to my body. An arm grabbed me and pulled me through a mirror. I started to scream but a hand covered my mouth.
I was pulled out of the house into a small room with a trapped door in the floor. The hand belongs to a boy, pale with long arms and legs like a spiders. His hair was black and messy. And had black "bags" around his eyes. "Shhhhhh" He said putting his index finger to his finger.
He pulled up the trapped door and jumped down, pulling me down with him. "Who are you?" I asked. "Shhhh, keep your voice down, My name is Cratherious Wellsarwus. And We are not in a human territory." the boy said. "Ummm, is there something I can call you by. And, no duh" I said. "Fine just call me Crather" Cratherious said. "Ok, Im Michcelle Lightmoon" I said. Crather started running now, and I was close behind him. Suddenly, he stopped, paused, and said, "I know".

This was chapter 1. Should I continue?

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MadHatter (2012-05-19 19:03:48)

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nope, not even CLOSE to all that

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MadHatter (2012-07-01 20:39:36)

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Part 2 is up

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MadHatter (2012-07-05 19:04:02)

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