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Teen War Pt. 5: Company

Started by minicraft
(2012-07-10 23:25:52)

kblackeagle (2012-07-11 01:58:12)

Make them smart enough to pull their weapons out of their bag. If you don't in part 6, you'll get a disrespect from me. If they do pull out their daggers, you get a respect.

Apart from that, and the fact that chapters are a tad bit short, I love it.

Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.

kblackeagle (2012-07-11 02:03:48)

If you kill the person who's trying to kill you, you're safer.

Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.

spadeguy (2012-07-11 03:33:05)

Pretty AWESOME! How about they get a slight advantage,or a hideout!

I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END

KittyKat33 (2012-07-11 04:13:55)

Amazing as always! I love the backround you gave my character! I can already see this series turing out great!

Don't use this website anymore, sadly I'm an adult now.

Kiba (2012-10-11 01:47:51)

god your good

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RinFujimaru (2012-10-14 00:28:48)

Hey man, good story, But try add a bit more action, and maybe even some critical injuries among Faeryl's group. ALSO, make it strategical, because it's nice to know they have a plan in mind. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

-b Keep up the effort and good work!!

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