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Adventure Time: Bad DVD part 3
Started by ultraguy4
(2012-08-08 03:34:07)
ultraguy4 (2012-08-08 03:34:07)
I hit the play button on the remote. Jake still had his arms snaked around Marceline's neck as she explained what happened. "Finn died about 2 weeks ago yesterday, as you know." It goes to a flashback at this point, and Marceline is voicing over. "I was pushing my dad back into the Night-O-Sphere when Finn came along. He wanted to help, so I let him." (Flashback) "Back off, dad! Get out of Ooo! No one leaves the Night-O-Sphere!" Hunson laughed and pried the axe bass out of Marceline's hands. "Tsk, tsk. If you aren't going to use the family axe right, you don't get to use it, period." He throws it into a nearby tree as Finn springs into action. He charges at Hunson, sword extended. Marceline starts to shout. "Wha- FINN, NO!! HE'LL-" But it was too late. Hunson grabbed the sword, swung it around, and flung Finn into the axe bass still stuck in the tree. Finn yells in pain and falls off the blade, onto his face. Hunson doesn't bother to stick around. "Well, that was a bit akward. I suppose I should be going..." With that, he opened a portal at his feet and went back from whence he came. Marceline rushed over to Finn. "Finn! Are you alright!?" He rolls onto his back and stares up at her. "Not... really. It hurts. A lot. I don't think I'll make it."

It wasn't the fact Finn was dying made her burst into tears, it was that to a degree, she was responsible for this. She took Finn's head and set it in her lap. "I-I'm sorry. I didn't mean for it to turn out like this..." He raised a finger to her lips. "Don't. You'll make me feel like a patoot before I'm gone." He cracked a weak smile and closed his eyes. "F-Finn?" she said trembling. No response. She started crying even louder. The flashback ends.

Jake was still cynical. "If he died more than 2 weeks sgo, how's he alive NOW?" Marceline explained about the vial in her cabinet and how it could make the dead live again. It was at that moment Finn regained conciousness. He sat up and saw Jake with his hands around Marceline's neck. "...Huh- GET YOUR HANDS OFF OF HER!!!" Finn wildly swung his sword at Jake. Jake retaliated by restraining Finn against the wall. Finn's eyes flashed over for a second, and he returned to normal. "Oh no... I'm evil! This is the last thing I want you to do as my friends... kill me." Marceline looked at him in shock. "Y-you can't be serious!" Finn's expression told otherwise. Marceline started crying . "I can't do it again! The first time was bad enough! Please don't make me..." Jake gave Marceline a sad look. "It's what he wants. I'm afraid this is beyond our control." She solemnly picks her axe bass up off of the floor and hesitantly raises it up. She looks away, not wanting to see what she's doing. She swings, and blood spatters her and Jake. She looks up and cries. Finn is slumped against the bloodstained wall, a large gash in his chest, eyes closed, a look of contentment on his face. Jake picks up the body and leaves. Marceline stares at the wall for a while. She looks st her axe bass on the floor. She lifts it up. She looks into the metal of the blade and sees her reflection.

It skips ahead a few days. Jake goes to visit Finn's grave when he is shown a disturbing sight. Marceline's axe is in her stomach. She is leaning against Finn's now blood spattered headstone. She looks like she would just sleeping in bed. A note is pinned to her chest.

Jake hesitantly picks up the note as you hear Marceline's voice. 'If you've found this, it means I'm dead. It's most likely Jake, since I just know he'll be here. Anyway, I couldn't live with the guilt of killing Finn not once, but twice. It was too much to bear. Now I'm probably with him, kissing or whatever. As my final request, give this axe to my dad. I sure don't need it. Tell him his daughter's happy now. Thank you world, for everything you've done. Now, it's my time to move on.
Signed, Marceline Abadeer.'

Jake looks at Marceline's body and puts it in the coffin with Finn. "It's what they would've wanted," Jake said with a tear in his eye. He takes the bass and walks off. You can hear Marceline and Finn laughing in the background as the credits roll.


There you have it folks! The end of the trilogy! Hmm... I think I'll do distorted shows a bit more often. Bloody GIR, anyone?
BRING ME YOUR VIRGINS.
ultraguy4 (2012-08-08 04:37:03)
Not the origin. A twisted episode. Y'know?
BRING ME YOUR VIRGINS.
ultraguy4 (2012-09-22 17:42:34)
(Bump) I remember staying up late for about 3 hours thinking of how to conclude this... I wonder what was going through my head at that moment? (:<

If I had read some of the creepypasta I do now, I'm almost positive the story would've turned out different. Oh well...

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2012-09-22 17:52:00

BRING ME YOUR VIRGINS.
 

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