espace39 (2012-09-02 13:07:21)

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[MAY NOT BE SUITABLE FOR YOUNGER / SENSETIVE READERS!]

Knowing that if he grabbed the crowbar that the bandits will kill Opal, Tom needed to fend them off for awhile. He sprung up and punched a bandit right in the face, and then did the same on the right side, and then upper-cutted him right in the nose, He then grabbed the terrorist and slammed his head into his knee multiple times and threw him to the ground. But suddenly, Tom felt a strong constriction on his neck, and then felt a flurry of punches against his face. Tom then got out of the headlock and kicked the terrorist in the stomach, Knocking him into the inferno of the flames that nearly claimed Opals life. Then, Tom turned around to see another terrorist, Drawing a pistol and about to finish Opal off. Tom then grabbed the crowbar and upper-cut the terrorist in the bottom of the head with the crowbar, hooking his jaw and tearing it off. Tom then pulled out his knife and plunged it in the fallen terrorist's neck, twisted it sideways and pulled it downwards, ripping his chest open. He then ran over to Opal to see if he was ok, and he wasnt. "Im fine man." He told Tom, before coughting up blood. "Aww man, That blast f*cked you up big time!" Said Tom. "Just hang in there!". Tom saw Opal begin to slowly die. Tom then jabbed him with an adrenaline needle. "Your not dying on my watch!" He said. Then a group of medics ran over. "We got this covered, get back in the jeep bro!" Tom Ran back into the gunners seat. He fired at the terrorists on the hill. Tom offered succesful supression as the Venom's came over the horizon and hail fired the hill with missiles. This made Tom feel good. Somthing about those flaming bodies falling down the hill made him feel relieved. As the helicopters landed, Medics rushed out with a stretcher bed and loaded Opal onto it. Tom looked at Opal as he was loaded onto the Helicopter. "Hang in there bro." He muttered to himself. "Hang in there".

To be continued...

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espace39 (2012-09-02 17:29:11)

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I Require feedback.

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espace39 (2012-09-03 08:51:18)

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Bump.

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espace39 (2012-09-03 19:28:47)

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I did.↑ Its great!

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