RinFujimaru (2012-11-14 04:44:17)

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Part 1
Crystal's PoV(Point of view)
Hi there! My name is Crystal, and I've come to tell you a series tales about some crazy phenomenons! So, just to point it out, NO, I am NOT a girl. I know what you're thinking, Crystal is a girl's name. You're not thinking it? Please. I'm pretty sure you're like 'Crystal's a guy?!'
Ok, enough of that. Time to get to the story. *By the way, the following 1st person veiw will be viewed as if at the present, not the past.
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Chapter 1

So yeah, it was your average day, being 13. Chilling on the patio of your floating house, munching on a few tacos(Yeah, that's Totally normal). I'm an angel from a newbie-squad of 4 others. I was probably the youngest in the group. Let's see...there's Luther, he's maybe 14, Uh...Cheyenne, who is also 14, Lily, who is my age, but a months older. Then of course, there is Alex. He's like 15. Woah...I'm getting off topic there...anyways, Let me describe myself for you.
I've blue, almost white hair, blue, sparkly eyes(Girls tell me they're pretty like girl's eyes ). I'm sort of skinny, about 106 lbs. I am 5'5, with a large wing-span. Strangly, my feathers glitter in the brightest of moon-light. Weird, huh? I wonder why.
Back to the story.
So, I'm sitting peacefully, enjoying my juicy, meaty, super delicious taco. But of course, that idiot comes.
"Crystal!", shreiks out a kid-like voice.
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Chapter 2

"Son of a...What is it Pit!?", I yelled back.
"Time for your-" *BANG* (Note; words beginning and ending with "*" is a description of sound)
"*Sigh* Idiot..." I said in reply to his mistake. He had ran straight into a pole, and fell down unconscious for a few seconds.
But suprisingly, he got up like nothing happened.
"It's time for your daily training drills!" He said, finishing his sentence, which was interrupted before colliding with the insignificant pole.
"Great..." I said un-enthusiasticly, weakly pumping my arm in the air with a sarcastical tone.
We walked through the main corridor, which connected to the training feilds and courts.
"Here!" Said Pit.
He handed me a First Blade, which was said to be the very weapon Pit had used in the time when Medusa revived after 25 years.
The First Blade wasn't very strong compared to other weapons, but it was decent for a newbie like me. It had balanced attributes and had formidable offense against opposing forces & what-not.
I stepped up and took aim at the target.
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End of Part 1.
How was it? Please comment and tell me about any errors. Thanks for reading! Part 2 will be out soon!

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2012-11-14 04:46:42

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DannyPhantom (2012-11-15 02:46:07)

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Could be improved.

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RinFujimaru (2012-11-15 04:03:24)

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Lol. Not suprised. I'm a bit new at story-writing, but it will get better as the series goes. Just be patient, and I'll have 2 and 3 up in no time!

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RinFujimaru (2012-11-16 02:57:52)

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Um, no. Sorry, but I'm still ploting the story and I plan on making around 3 seasons. Plus, I'm going to have the fans help out by giving me some OC's. @FinnHuman

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RinFujimaru (2012-11-16 20:51:30)

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Yeah, I'm a noob at stories.

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