HaruChan(2012-11-24 01:30:36)I walked into the woods with my flashlight. My brother had dared me, saying something about "Slenderman" or something. As I wondered who, or what, that could be, I heard a twig snap. I turned around only to be greeted by my friend, Flamine. "Hey Pride," she said. "Sup Flam?" I said, and continued on. Suddenly I came across a piece of paper. On it, it had a picture of a tall, long-armed, faceless man (that looked like a 3-year-old had drawn it) and the words GO AWAY. I collected it and kept walking. "Creepy, huh?" Flamine said.
I know it's short, but should I continue? If you have nothing nice to say, don't say it. (Constructive criticism is fine.)
HaruChan(2012-11-24 01:38:00)Sure! What do you want your character's name to be?
HaruChan(2012-11-24 10:13:31)Alright, pt. 2 coming soon
I walked into the woods with my flashlight. My brother had dared me, saying something about "Slenderman" or something. As I wondered who, or what, that could be, I heard a twig snap. I turned around only to be greeted by my friend, Flamine. "Hey Pride," she said. "Sup Flam?" I said, and continued on. Suddenly I came across a piece of paper. On it, it had a picture of a tall, long-armed, faceless man (that looked like a 3-year-old had drawn it) and the words GO AWAY. I collected it and kept walking. "Creepy, huh?" Flamine said.
I know it's short, but should I continue? If you have nothing nice to say, don't say it. (Constructive criticism is fine.)