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3DSPlaza - Sky Fortress: The Movie - Part 2
WYoshiX2 (2012-12-05 20:02:47)Awesome story so far, but one bit of advice, you should probably indent each quotation to make it easier to follow.
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"Crap, it won't be as easy as I thought.", C11Dev said. "Would you want a crappy one part story? Of course it's not that easy!", D2296 said. When we reached the floor, I flew to my profile and started researching Hacker. "So... His name is Akise Aru, as in Chrono, remember? We gotta see if he hacked anything else..", I said. Sure enough, it came up with PC3DS, Epic3DS, 3DSAR7, 3DSRoxas, 3DStrife, and more. "He never successfully hacked this site, though. Those sites don't have /life.", C11Dev said. "DUDE, BE QUIET!", I said. Too late. I felt electricity, I saw all white, and felt the ground shaking. "Great going. We're being sent back.", Bean said. Then I felt like I was being stirred in the air, and then I found that everyone and I were in my room. "We need to make those rays again.", I told D2296. "Ok, did you write down how you make them?", he asked. "You were supposed to do that.", I said. Then we ran to the basement. I started working on the boards and wiring. D2296 worked on the model. "Um, can you help us, guys?", D2296 asked. "What do you need?", C11Dev asked. "Just help me work on the model. I need to get this switcher dial done.", he replied. "All four boards are done. We just need to install them.", I said. Then I inserted the boards and infused them in. We all switched them to 3DSPlaza and zapped ourselves. BZZZZZZZZT.
"I don't think this is correct. The fortress is here. Hey, there's us!", I said. I saw four translucent figures. Was this the future, where we're possibly dead, or the past, which has tracers? I checked the time on the Eluctrolucidator ray. "3DSPlaza - December 2012", it read. "We're in the right time. What's going on?", I asked. "Maybe we have to go together. We look translucent too.", Bean said. So I joined in with the tracer. "You're right. Maybe the Eluctrolucidator is off by a few hours.", I said. Then the fortress raised into the sky. "Yep, let's set it to six hours later.", I said. We set the rays to 6 HOURS IN THE FUTURE. BZZZT. POP. "Ok, here we are.", I said. "We should start to go through the path.", I said.
TBC.