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Jerry.
Started by MeNobody14
(2013-04-05 05:55:15)
MeNobody14 (2013-04-05 05:55:15)
"Where are my sneakers?" He wondered. Today was his first day of highschool. The day he learned what its like to be caught in the drama of relationships. (Both friends, and those closer) "Jerry!" His mom called, "The bus is here!" She said. "K mom!" He slipped on a pair of crocks, grabbed his backpack, and headed out the door. "Dinners at six!" "k' mom!" He hopped on the bus and sat in the back next to all the "invisible". The invisible were all the kids (not many) that nobody seemed to notice. "H-hey Jerry." Said one. "Hi Mark." He replied. "Do you have it?" He asked. "Yes."

"It".. "It" Was a tracking device that was able to track anything you chose. Invented by Mark, one of those kid genius's. "Do you know where she is?" Jerry asked, "No. Not yet.. She's t-to dodgy." hisss *Bus doors open* "C'mon. We'll do that at lunch." Jerry said.

A few classes later:

Briiiiiiiiiiiiiing!

In the rush, Jerry and mark got seperated, But eventually found eachother in the cafeteria. "Have you found her yet?" Jerry asked, "Y-yes.. Why are you so obsessed anyway?" "You already know to much, Mark. Anymore and you'll be in serious danger." As he ate his food, he glanced out into the woods and saw a tall figure in the shadows, but thought nothing of it. Probably a custodian.. He thought.

After math, he went to his locker and put his books in, when he closed it, standing on the other side was..

A girl! "Whoa!" He yelped. "Sorry.. I didn't mean to scare you." She said, "I just noticed your new here and wanted to welcome you!" She held out her hand to shake but he just stood there, dumbfounded that someone was talking to him. "You okay?" Immediately he snapped out of his trance, "Uh.. Yeah. Thanks." He shook her hand, "My names Jerry." He said. "I'm Vanessa." She replied. He studied her for a moment. She had light blonde hair and an average complexion, She looked like a cheerleader and smelled like daffodils. "Umm... H-hi.." He stuttered, Ringgg! "That's my class.. I gotta go." He said. "Bye!" She said and walked away.

Later after school at Jerry's house, He and mark were using the tracker to find the girl that welcomed him. "Dude, Your a total s-stalker." Said mark. "Shut up, man! I wanna see if this actually works!". The Tracker was a small yellow box with an antenna on it that hooked up to marks computor. "She lives nextdoor!" Said Mark. "Thats.. Awkward.." Jerry said. "Where's our target?" He asked, "Right.. Over here, he said. Pointing to the upper corner of town. "In the Wal-Mart." Mark said. "Okay. I'm gonna go meet her."

He walked uptown and entered Wal-Mart. "Howdy!" Said the greeter. He smiled and waved to Jerry as Jerry walked past.
If I were my cousin... Where would I hide? I wandered around for a little bit and finally gained enough courage to enter the girls department. As he was passing a rack, A hand reached out and pulled him toward the other side. "What are You doing here?!" The person said, "Whoa! Don't do that 'cuz.. You nearly scared the crap out of me." The person he was talking to was a female, She had jet black hair and dark eyes. "Its what I do." She grinned in a creepy manor, "You look better without the hoodie and mask. You shopping for new ones?" Jerry asked, "A hoodie, Yes. But I like my mask. Now why are you here?" She said. "To stop you from killing someone. This isn't right Jane." She laughed insanically, and attracted the attention of a few shoppers. "Meet me at my house at 7, I'll show you something." Jerry said. "Fine. I'll be there."

Later that evening, while Jerry was playing on his Xbox, the doorbell rang.
Who could that be? He thought. "Coming!" When he opened the door, Vanessa stood there. "Hello Jerry." She said. "Vanessa? What are you doing here?" Jerry asked, very surprised. "I know who you are."

Hmm.. Jerry thought.. let's see how much she knows.
"Come on in." He said. After she walked in and he had closed the door, he offered her a seat. "Thank you." She said. "Who do you think I am?" Asked Jerry, "Think?" She laughed, "I know who you are!" She kept laughing for a moment and then said, "You wouldn't happen to know who this is, would you?" She held up a picture of a kid with black rimmed eyes, pale skin, and no lips. Jeff. "Do you?" Jerry asked, "His name is Jeff. Most say he's a killer. Kills unsuspecting people in their sleep." She held up another photo of a tall, lean man standing in the shadows. "Do you know who this is?" She asked, "I will not speak his name." Jerry replied. "And this?" She held up a photo of a smiling dog. "What is it you want?" Jerry asked, he had a creepy feeling about this girl, "What about her?" Finally, she held up a picture of Jane. "Who are you?" Jerry said, starting to feel afraid. "My name Is Vanessa. And I have been watching you. Did you know that the dog is my pet?" She whistled and the same dog from the photo came bounding in. "They hunt you. The person you thought was the custodian? That's Him." She pointed to the picture of slenderman. "Jeff, Carmen, Slendy. They all want something from you." She said. Her eyes twinkled insanically. "You have it. The secret to slenderman, the way to stop Jeff, All of it. Believe it or not, they fear you more than you fear them. And they will stop you." She paused for a moment, letting it sink in. "Why do you care. You have no reason to help me." Jerry said, "Ha.. Haha! Oh but I do. See, I know you can sense when these creatures are near, And I want you to help me. But I can't do that if your dead, now can I?" creak.. "Did you hear that?" He whispered to her. "Y-yes." For the first time, she actually seemed afraid. Even the dog whimpered and frowned. "Get behind me." Jerry said. "You don't need to hide, Jeff. I know your here." He tried to say it boldly, but it didn't come out that way. Then he came out of the kitchen. "Your no fun. No fear. No shivering. But you will.. I'll make you fear. Then I'll make you beautiful!" His eyes gleamed as he said it. "Why? Why must I fear you?" I asked. I glanced at the clock, 6:47. "Your just an ugly killer that can't think." Vanessa gave a small whimper behind me, and Smile dog drooped his tail.
'course it had to be tonight that mom and dad worked late.. he thought.
"Maybe I should start with her.." Jeff said. "You won't touch her!" Jerry yelled, surging forward, punching Jeff in the face and knocking the knife out of his hand. "Your a good for nothing killer." He picked up the knife. "I should kill you right now, but.." 6:58. bingo. "Hello Jeffrey, dear." A voice said. "Jane? Stay away!" Jeff got up and backed away, almost looking horrified. "Oh but Jeffrey, don't I look lovely?" Jane walked in and stood next to me. "Here." Jerry said, tossing the knife to Jeff. "Get out of here before I change me mind." Jeff picked up his knife and disappeared.

A few moments later, "He's gone now." Jerry said. "Who's she?" Jane pointed to Vanessa. "A friend." Jerry said. "And that?" She asked, pointing to Smile dog. "A twisted entity like you." Jerry replied. Vanessa looked afraid, "She won't bite." Jerry said, "Right Jane?" He asked, looking into her eyes. "No. A weak target." She said, sounding disappointed. "Sit down." Jerry said to Jane. "Do you want to become acquainted with my cousin?" He asked Vanessa. "Only if I don't have to sit next to her.." Jerry laughed, "Fine." He said.

"What did you want to show me?" Jane asked. "This." Jerry pulled out Marks tracker and fired it up, showing her locations of many different entity's. "This, Is a 'paranormal' tracker. Anything can be found in a matter of minutes." Jerry said. "Cool. Who's first?" Jane asked, "What do you mean 'who's first'? What are you up to?" Vanessa asked, I'd almost forgotten she was here. "We, meaning me and my cousin here, track down various entity's and either trap them or kill them."

End of part 1. I hope you enjoyed it!

Credit goes to all the awesome creepy pastas that scared the crap out of me. And my inspiration for various characters.





Vanessa..

The poor, misfortunate owner of smile dog.
Obsessed with creepypastas.
Insanity level: 17%


Jane.

Commonly known as Jane the Killer.
Obsessed with killing Jeff.
Insanity level: 63%

Jeff.

Commonly known as Jeff the Killer.
Obsessed with murder.
Insanity level: 87%

Jerry.

Jane's cousin.
Obsessed with tracking creepypastas.
Insanity level: 3

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-04-07 06:30:28

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-04-06 06:38:34)
You wrote it. 'Course you can survive.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-04-06 07:17:25)
I'm gonna focus on Vanessa's background in the next one since I didn't do much of of one in this part.
It's time for review, kiddo!
TheEpicOne (2013-04-06 10:24:51)
I love this series
Philly Fan for Life, Gamer For Life, Hunter for Life, Football for Life, Athlete for Life.
MeNobody14 (2013-04-06 23:10:15)
I came up with it myself. A lot of inspiration from various creepy pastas but my own story.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-04-08 08:40:50)
Bumping this 'cuz I'm posting the next one.
It's time for review, kiddo!
 

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