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Jerry, Continued.
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MeNobody14 (2013-04-09 03:56:24)She joined Jerry, and started hacking and slashing with him. "Look! Theres a light over there!" She said. She started rushing toward it and saw the tunnel! "Look Jerry! We found it!" She said. She heard footsteps, but when she turned around, she saw a creeper! "Die disgusting green thing!" She stabbed it once and it started glowing, and slightly getting larger. "Huh? Whats it.." "DUCK!" She heard Jerry holler.
The next few moments were a blur. Jerry tackled her and they both went rolling, then the creeper exploded, blowing up a spider with it. "Don't do that again!" Jerry said, and rolled off her. "You look cute when your flustered.." She said. "Look, theres the tunnel. Lets go."
They walked through it for awhile, they saw what looked like the end, when they reached it, it was a massive cavern, with glowstone hanging in the corners to light it up. "Wow. He has a pretty nice home." Vanessa said. "Careful. He could be " "Look out!" Crack! A lightning bolt hit Jerry and he stumbled forward and fell over. "Jerry!" She shouted and ran to him. "Are you okay?" She said with a worried look, "Yeah.. I think so." He said. Than he appeared. No fancy clouds. No explosions. Just, Pop. He looked just like the normal person, exept his eyes glowed and he had no pupils. "You!" She screamed and charged him, but he simply dodged her and shocked her. "Aggh!" She yelked and fell over. "Ungg.." She felt like she was losing concousness. "Jerry.." She groaned. She saw him. standing there. He started trembling. Shaking so hard he looked like he was gonna explode. He stood there, shaking. "You.." He said. "I despise you. Your kind are worthless fears. You only gain your power because of people who are afraid of you." He started shaking harder, if that was possible. And the entity, looked as if he had just had the crap scared out of him. Jerry's face started contorting, he looked strange. "J-jerry?" She said. "Leave!" And just like that, Herobrine dissapeared.
Jerry collapsed as Vanessa got up and ran toward him. "Jerry? Are you okay?" She asked worriedly. "Yeah.. Just gimme a sec." He said. " What did you do to him?" She asked. And then jerry lost concousness.
When he awoke, Vanessa was cradling him in her arms. "Jerry! Your alive!" She said. "Yeah.." He mumbled. Still unsure of what was going on. Vanessa hugged him tighter and kissed his forehead. "Don't do that again! she said. "Okay.." He replied. He got out of her grasp and stood up. "C'mon. lets go." He said. "Go where?" "Just hold tight, Ok?" He said. She hugged him and he picked her up. Her stomach lurched as they he started flying. "How are you.." "Hold on!" They picked up speed and when she looked she saw they were headed straight for the sky of ones and zeroes. "What are we gonna.." she started but before she could protest, the burst through the clouds, out of the computor, and onto the floor. "That was cool! Why didn't you tell me we could fly in that game?" She asked. "You can't." He said. "Huh?" She thought for a moment, and then said, "You can fly?" She asked. "Yes.. I'm not good at it but yes." He said. "Wow!" She said, amazed. Then mark walked in with a glass of water, "Whoa!" he gasped, "Give me warning next time!" He said. "Hey mark, where's Jane?" Jerry asked. "She left lastnight. Said she had something to do." He said. "Oh no.." Jerry said. He paled and Vanessa asked, "What is it?" "We've got to find her." He said.
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Vanessa whistled to her dog, keeping it away from the pedestrians. At the moment she was out for a walk, enjoying the spring smells and excitement of blooming flowers and clean-aholics. "Here Smiley! C'mere boy!" She called. Why can't I have a normal dog? She thought, I mean, I like him and all, but, he scares me sometimes.. She was on her way to Jerry's house, ready to plan the next assault.
Ding-Dong!
"Oh, Hi Vanessa." Jerry said,
"Come on in." She walked inside and sat on the couch, Smile laid at her feet. "Wheres Jane?" She asked, glancing at the kitchen.
"Shopping." Jerry replied, with a little annoyance in his voice, "You should have gone with her." Vanessa said. "She's fine. I think.." He said. "Want a Sprite?" He asked, "No thanks." She said.
Awkward silence.
"Why don't you sit down?" She said, "Umm... Okay." He replied. Nervously he sat down next to her, wondering what to do next. "I'm not here to cuddle if thats what you think." She said. He turned his head and blushed, as did She. "But I wouldn't mind if we got a little closer.." She edged toward him, ready for it..
Slam!
She sat straight, startled by the noise, "Hi Jane." Jerry said. "Did you find the OJ?" He asked. "Huh? Oh, yeah.. I got a new hoodie too." Jane said. "Another? Wouldn't that make three?" Boys.. Vanessa thought. "I need more than one! Unless you prefer odorous females." Jane replied. "Whatever. We need to figure out the next target." Jerry said. "Why not Herobrine?" Jane asked, "You play minecraft enough." She said. "Herobrine?" Vanessa asked, "Who's that?" "The only thing in minecraft that nobody knows much about." Jerry answered. "Ookay.. If its in a video game, how in the world are we supposed to stop it? Its not like you can just... Hey, why are you looking at me like that?" Vanessa said, "Give me a week, and I'll give you an answer."
Exactly one week later, (counting days hours and minutes) Jerry and Mark made a device that transported you into any game. "So how does it work?" Vanessa asked, "Well," Mark started, "Nevermind.." Vanessa said quickly. Mark was one of those geeks that explained everything. "You and Jerry will go in while Me and Jane monitor the computor." Mark said. "Okay, Mark. No mods installed, Right?" Jerry asked, "No mods." Mark said. "Alright, Fire it up." Jerry and Vanessa stood infront of the little device, while Mark started it. "Close your eyes and count backwards from 7." He said. "7" They said together, "6" Mark turned it on, "5" "4" "Good luck." Jane said. "3" A white light filled the room. "2" "Don't die, Jerry." Mark said. "1" Flash
It felt like hours, or maybe days, until the finally landed in the world of Minecraft. "It looks so.. Big.." Vanessa said. "Kind of a duh, Its an infinite world generator." Jerry replied. She turned around and looked into the sky, "Wow.." Jerry turned around and saw it too, "Ditto." He said. The sky was filled with ones and zeroes. Everywhere was one code or another. "Cool!" She said. "Lets gather wood." Jerry replied.
A few hours later they had made a humongous tree house, a cobblestone generator, tools, armor, food, and a place to sleep. Vanessa yawned, "Do you get to sleep in here?" She asked, "Top tier, left side. I'll keep watch."Jerry replied. "Okay." Vanessa said. She walked up a spiral staircase to the bedroom. "Wow, for a blocky game, These beds are surprisingly comfortable." She said. She laid down, and soon fell asleep.
When she awoke, she felt hungry. She got up, stretched, and walked down to the food chest. "Mornin' Sleepyhead" Jerry said. "Goodmorning Jerry." She said. "Bread is in the top one. Apples in the bottom." He said. "Okay." She picked out a peice of bread and a few apples." So when will we find him?" She asked. "We'll head out pretty soon. Get your gear and meet me at the base of the tree." He said. "Roger." She said and grinned. That made him turn his head, and she guessed he was blushing, so she left quickly. I wonder what he thinks of me.. She thought.
After they got their gear, she headed for the bottom. "Lets go." He said. "We'll head into the hills, and see if we can find one of those fabled tunnels of his." "Alright." She said.
After what felt like hours of wandering, it saterted to get dark. "No tunnel." She said. "Lets hurry. I'd rather not see a creeper." Jerry replied. They started sprinting around the hills, looking, hoping for a tunnel. "Stay close!" Jerry said. Just then, it started to rain. Perfect timing because the monsters started spawning. "Lets go!" He yelled. "What?" She tried to ask what to do, but he took off and started slashing everthing in his path. "Wahoo!" He hollered. "This is ten times better than using a keyboard!" He said. "Yuck! Is that a zombie?!" She said. Right then a spider snuck up behind her and knocked her over. "What..?" She used her reflexes and stabbed it. "Wow.. That was totally disgusting and awesome!
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