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Jerry. (Ep. 3)
Started by MeNobody14
(2013-04-09 08:38:06)
MeNobody14 (2013-04-09 08:38:06)
Ding-Dong!

"I got it!" Jerry said, as he opened the door, he saw Jane standing there. "Hey, where'd y.." She burst past him and almost made it to her room when Jerry spun her around and examined her. "Where did you..." He saw the blood on her shirt, and a knife sticking out of her boot. "Is this your blood?" He asked. "No.." Jane replied. That sent Jerry into overdrive. He grabbed Jane by the collar of her hoodie and shoved her up against the wall, "Why'd you do it?! What in the world were you thinking?!" He yelled. Vanessa heard the noise and walked into the hallway. "Jerry?" She said, "WHO'S DEAD JANE?" He yelled, tears were coming out of his eyes as he pushed her harder against the wall. "He.. He w-was an escaped c-convict.." She stuttered. "It doesn't matter who he was!!" He started shaking, "You promised Jane!" He yelled. "Jerry! Calm down!" Vanessa said. Jerry ignored her and shook harder. Jane started trembling and looked afraid. "I-i c-couldn't h-h-help it.." She stuttered. "He threw her across the hallway and into her door. She slumped down and lost concousness. Jerry almost grabbed her again, but before he could, Vanessa spun him around and held him. "What are you doing?!" Vanessa said, Nearly as angry as he was.

He kept shaking, looking dazed. "Come here.." She lead him into her bedroom, on the way she told Mark to help Jade. "Sit here, okay?" She sat him on the bed and went to the kitchen to get some water. When she came back, he was the same, trembling hard and staring into nothing. "Jerry?" She gently patted his cheeks in an attempt to wake him. "Jerry!" She stopped patting and simply slapped him. He fell back and lay there. still dazed. "You stay here, Ok?" He slightly nodded his head. "Ok. I'm gonna get a shower, so behave." She said. She walked into the bathroom and closed the door.

She came out later in a bathrobe and her hair in a towel, She walked over to Jerry and saw his eyes were closed but he was still shaking. She sat down on the bed and picked his upper body up and cradled him. "Your cute when you sleep." She whispered. He slowly opened his eyes, staring into her face. He suddenly jerked up and shouted Janes name, as if nothing had happened between last night and now. "Calm down!" Vanessa said and pulled him back. "Your not going anywhere without me. Especially after what happened last night." She said. "What?" Jerry asked, just coming out of his daze, he stopped shaking and sat still in her lap. "What're you doing?" He asked, "Making sure you don't hurt anyone again." She said. "I.. Wait.. umm.. " He said, still confused. "I want to see my parents." He mumbled. He sat there, for awhile muttering about Janes promise, and so on. "Where are they?" Vanessa finally asked. "I'll show you as soon as your dressed." He answered.

They walked to the woods behind his house and headed through the pathway. "This place is creepy." Vanessa said. "So?" Jerry answered. He kept shaking now and then and still seemed a bit confused, But he had calmed down alot since he got mad at Jane. "We're almost there." Jerry said. Almost where? Theres nothing here! Vanessa thought. "There's more here than you think." Jerry said. Vanessa wondered what he meant.

After a few more minutes they came to an old mansion. Not the creepy kind in horror stories, this looked like a real mansion with real people in it. "There's mom in the garden." Jerry pointed to a tall figure bent over some azaleas. "Hi mom!" He said, and for the first time, he actually looked happy to Vanessa. The woman stood up and turned around, Vanessa saw her face and gasped. There was only a mouth, no eyes, no ears, that kinda looked like a nose, but no defining features. "Oh, Jerry!" His mom said. They hugged and it seemed as if his mom was studying him. "Wheres dad?" He asked. "He's out in the forest, He'll be back in time for dinner, dear." She said. She lifted her face and looked at Vanessa, "Who's this, Jerry?" She asked in a pleasant voice, "Thats Vanessa. The next-door neighbor." He said. Vanessa stood there, mouth agape. "Close your mouth, dear. You'll catch flies." His mom said. With that, she went inside. "I'm gonna go get my sis. You coming?" Jerry asked. "Your mom is Slenderwoman.." Vanessa muttered. "You have a sister?" She asked, surprised. "Yeah." He headed off into the woods.

After walking for awhile, They came up behind the school. "Why are we here?" Vanessa asked. "Because this, " He pointed to the back of the school, "Is my sisters hide out." Jerry said. Vanessa still didn't see why they were here. There was nowhere to hide. "Stay here." He said. He walked to the back of the school, stopped, looked around, and then took another step and fell! "Jerry!" Vanessa yelled. His head popped out of the ground. "Yeah?" He answered. "How are you doing that?" She said and walked over to him. When she got there, she saw he was in a drain. "Doing what?" At the moment he was floating. "I'll be back in a sec." He said.

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-04-10 12:54:08

It's time for review, kiddo!
TheEpicOne (2013-04-09 10:37:39)
Moar make it longer
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MeNobody14 (2013-04-10 02:05:23)
Updated.
It's time for review, kiddo!
 

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