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Jerry. (Ep. 4)
Started by MeNobody14
(2013-04-10 10:16:08)
MeNobody14 (2013-04-10 10:16:08)
When he reached the bottom, He flipped a switch and lit the place up. "Hey sis! You down here?" He called. A girl, his age, stepped out of a small room down the way. She had a metal mask over her face that only showed her eyes. "Yes, Need something?" She asked. Jerry heard a whimper and paused for a moment. "Who's the victim, Carmen?" He asked. "Another one of the girls that pushed me." She said. "Let me see her." He said.

She lead him into the small room, A girl, about 15, was sitting in the corner. She had her hands behind her back and her head in her knees. Constantly whimpering and crying, she muttered "I didn't mean it.." over and over. "Did she see your face?" He asked, "Not yet." Carmen replied. "Dinner is gonna be in about 15 minutes. Why don't you introduce yourself to my friend up there?" He suggested, "But.." Carmen protested, "Now, Carmen." He said. She walked off muttering something about older twins and left.

Jerry knelt next to the girl and put his hand on her shoulder. She twitched and stopped sobbing for a moment, unsure of what would happen next. Jerry stayed there until she looked up, and then she asked "Are you gonna hurt me?". "No. I'm here to help." He replied, trying to be gentle when he was really uncomfortable. "Did you get rid of.. of.." She said. "No. All she was gonna do was show you whats under the mask and then put you to sleep so the police would find you. " He said. "I wanna go home.." She whimpered. "Here, let me help you, hold on to me, ok?" He stood up and helped her up, she held on to him tightly and cried on his shoulder. Worst possible thing that could happen to a guy.. Jerry thought. He picked her up and flew her out next to Vanessa and Carmen. "Here we go." He said. The girl looked up and saw Carmen and then buried her head in his chest and sobbed harder. "I wanna go home!" She cried. "Its ok, She won't hurt you." He comforted her until she finally stopped crying. "I'll take you home, Ok?" He said. "O-ok.." She replied. She held on and he flew her home and went back to the mansion.

"Hey, where's Vanessa?" Jerry asked when he got back. "In the garden." Carmen replied. "Ok." He said. Jerry headed out to the garden. When he got there, he saw Vanessa sniffing the daisies. "Hey." He said. Vanessa jumped when he called. "Don't sneak up like that!" She said. "Sorry." He aswered. "Wanna go do something?" He asked. "Like what?" She asked, "Hmm.. We could.. hmm.." He thought for a moment, unsure of what to do. "Wanna go to the basement?" He asked. "Sure." She said.

They walked down The steps. Vanessa was unsure of what they would find. "What's down here?" She asked, "You'll find out." He said. Sadly. The staircase was long and curvy, when they finally reached the bottom, she saw it was full of knick-knacks

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-04-13 13:39:01

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-04-12 03:53:49)
Updated.

It's time for review, kiddo!
TheEpicOne (2013-04-12 10:20:25)
MOAR!!
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