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Jerry. (Ep. 5)
TheEpicOne (2013-04-13 10:33:46)MOAR!!
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This is the saddest part of the story, every story with a protagonist needs not only an antagonist, but a reason to fight the bad guys. This is why Jerry is obsessed in hunting them, This is it, the conclusion to the first "season" of this story.
I will be doing this from Vanessa's point of view, so instead of saying (Vanessa did this) I'll just say I.
I looked around for a moment, seeing all this stuff was really cool! There were various newspaper clippings of creepypasta sitings. I looked back and didn't see Jerry anywhere. "Jerry?" I called. I looked around and saw a doorway with a blue light coming from it. I walked in and saw Jerry standing still, he didn't even turn around. I followed what he was staring at, It was a girl, about 16, standing there. Her right arm was outstretched and her left hand was on her chest. Her face was freckled and her hair was wavy, blonde. She had a thin nose and a firm posture. I wondered why she was standing like that when I heard a voice say, "She's frozen." I turned around to see Carmen, "She's frozen?" I asked, repeating the words. "Yes, she was Jerry's gaurdian in the real world." Carmen said. "What's a gaurdian?" I asked, "Gaurdians protect young non-evil creepypastas from people. She was his mother in your world." She answered. She looked sad, on the verge of tears. "Jerry loved her like you, " I was about to ask what she meant when she continued, " They were walking through the park out of school, going home when she got the sense they were Being followed. She led him around town, seeing no one follow her. She brought him to her house, the one you guys stay in, and asked Jerry how school went. While he was telling her, she heard a creak in the door. She whispered to Jerry to hide behind her, and not to make a peep. " she paused for a moment and wiped her eyes. "He came. He walked in there, like a ghost. Jerry barely survived..." She started crying, and left. I looked at Jerry, he still stood there. "Who is He?" I asked. Jerry still stood there. Gazing into the woman's face. Even though I couldn't see his face, I knew he was crying. "I'm sorry Jerry." I said, and I really meant it. He started shaking, just a little at first, and then more, and more, until it was like he was an earthquake itself. "Jerry?" I asked, and then he brushed past me and stormed up the stairs.
I followed him, wondering what he was doing. I followed him to his room, and then asked, "What's the matter?" "Go away." He said bitterly. "I'm sorry.." I said. "Go away." He repeated. I edged closer, hoping to comfort him. "I feel terrible." He said. "I feel terrible that I forgot about her.." He said sadly, "Every time I go down there, she's stille waiting, hoping for some rescuer." He shook his head and cried. "I'm really sorry Jerry.." I said. I sat down on the bed next to him and held him for a moment. "Is there a way to un-freeze her?" I asked. "It's nearly impossible, but yes." He said. "You need a time shard to pull something like that off." He said. "What's a time shard?" I asked, "Ever heard of Father Time?" He said, "Answer one of his lousy riddles and boom! You got one. But even if we did get one, nobody knows how to use it." He finished. Nobody, Huh? I thought. "Let's try."
2013-04-15 07:30:19