CandyVixen (2013-05-16 11:32:43)

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so u r smooching ur gf wen ur phone rings you anser phone and dude on other end says 'wat r u doing wit my daughter' so i den tell gf about da call and she says mah dad is dead THEN WHO WAS PHONE

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CandyVixen (2013-05-16 11:33:31)

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not by me btw

also this is my first thread

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imawsome12 (2013-05-16 11:41:23)

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TO MANY MISTAKES!

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-16 11:41:58)

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Obviously.

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CandyVixen (2013-05-17 03:08:42)

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the original pasta has bad spelling e3e

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-17 04:21:28)

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No it doesn't. :l I've seen the original.

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imawsome12 (2013-05-17 13:00:00)

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Even if the origanal had the same mistakes, you could've corrected them yourself. It's only one paragraph anyway.You basiclly broke all the rules.

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SPCOxion (2013-05-17 13:32:38)

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So you're smooching your girlfriend, when your phone rings. You answer it, and the guy on the other end asks, "What are you doing with my daughter?" Later, you tell your girlfriend about the call, and she says her dad is dead.

THEN WHO WAS PHONE

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CandyVixen (2013-05-18 14:13:08)

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im sorry i shal lock ^_^ (LOCKED)

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