CandyVixen (2013-05-23 15:04:59)

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hello my name is lily and i have ginger hair. and a strange star shaped birthmark on my left elbow. im just your averadge 14 year old or that's what i thought. well heres my story.

it was a nice summer day when it happend i was takeing a walk with my friend beth. "want to have a sleep over tonight?" "na my parents are having a meeting" "ok" i then saw that we were infront of my house. "see you tomarow" "ok bye" beth than contenued walking to her house. as i walked up the steps to my porch i heared a rustling sound behind me i then turned around and nothing was there. i just passed it off as a rabbit and entered my house.
"how was school today" asked my mom "same as usual" i sayed as i walked up the stairs and to my room. i set my backpack down and instintly went on the computer i chatted with my friend's. i took a look at the clock and it was 10:00 'allready?!' i thought to myself. i sayed bye and closed the window i changed into my pajamas and went to bed.
*tap tap tap* i was woken by a tapping in my window i looked at the clock 12:30 i got up and walked twords the window thinking that it was a tree branch then i rememberd there isent a tree near my window i then looked out the window and saw nothing. i grumbled to myself and turned around "lily" huh? i hered a voice calling my name i then looked out the window agein and saw a hand gestering for me to come over.



ok that's my story so far i promise i will add more later. im sorry if there is any bad spelling or anything ^_^' what do you guy's think so far? this is also my first attempt at trying to write a real story

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-23 16:15:00)

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Punctuation.
Capitolization.
Spelling.

Fix it.

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CandyVixen (2013-05-23 22:10:30)

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i give up on the creepypasta/story forum you guys are just being jerks T_T

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