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Fanfictionsokemon--Affliction to Journey-CH.1
Started by Amatsuki
(2013-06-04 03:43:46)
Amatsuki (2013-06-04 03:43:46)
This was inspired by a Fanfiction on www.Fanfiction.net/mobile. Please refer there for the inspiration I had.

-Sorry for the emoticon on the title, can't fix it :c-


-This story contains scenes of blood and gore (in later tense)

-It also contains scenes some kids may find sad/and or freightening, not for the feint of heart
-This will have educational value over grammar, so no need to worry, if you find any errors, pm me so I can fix them. On with the story!

CHAPTER.1- Emerging from the depths--

It was a relatively bright and sunny day in the forest that lie here, the sunny rays escaping through the trees, in this particular forest many pokemon roam free without any worries except for a few kinks here and there. Overall this place was just like any other forest. Off into a clearing a rustling could be heard and then fained out into the distance. There, in a clearing on the soft grass lay a lone egg, with no one to tend to it. Many of the pokemon residents would just ignore it, assuming it either belonged there or the parents would come by and claim their egg. But no such time came.


Pokemon eggs are complicated in their own right. They could never hatch at all and lie there without any form of being devoloped inside and be dead. or they would, by some miracle, hatch on their own. That's exactly what was happening to this egg now, with a loud crack ang jump, whatever was inside was trying to get out. It hopped and broke its blue and black limb out of the side of the egg, spreading out a peice of its egg onto the forest floor.


In all of the hopping the egg began to tumble, and eventually role down a steep hill nearby. With the egg running down the hill quickly the passanger quickly kept its hands inside so he would not hurt it by hitting something(A lesson to you goonies who have your hand hanging out the car window). It finally crashed into a tree, wich coincidentally smashed the egg into bits and peices, and the passanger was unscaved.


The newly born character first looked at his own hands and body, memorized by it's new founds on life. In this world it is known as a riolu, but it does not know that yet. He then starting smelling the air and himself, thinking of what he was, but was then distracted by a beedrill that was passing by over the open feild of flowers. Wait flowers? Whats that? The curiosity of the riolu was too much and it gave into it's temptations, running through the feilds rather cutely as it let its arms hang to its sides, running it's paws over the tulips and daisys, inhaling the welcoming scent until he even coughed a bit.


After it's little run through it started to feel something. Loneliness, it wanted to share all of this with someone, but who? It lost sight of the beedrill and thought that maybe where he hatched, up on the hill, was soneone waiting for him? Him? He just assumed he was a he, he was so confuzed by this strange new world, and it made him want answers.


He soon got to the top of the hill where he had hatched, and to his surprise, there was not a thing in sight, except for the trees and vegitation of course. Being dissapointed the riolu continued down the hill where it rode feeling rather groggy and tired, it tried fixing its egg back up to nap in it but failed miserably. Even more dissapointed and saddened the riolu simply took a peice of its egg, found a clearing patch of grass and slept for the first time in this new lonely world...



[Sorry for the short chapter! But i'm kinda tired, so the second one will be out tomorrow, remember to PM me and tell me about any suggestions or idea's. K bye!]


~Amatsuki~

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-06-04 10:45:16

Probably sleeping, probably eating.
 

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