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ccisawesome (2013-06-04 05:04:47)dang this looks short i might add more tommorow but thats basicly it for part 1 sorry 4 breaking rule 4.
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imawsome12 (2013-06-04 05:06:10)Huh? I'm sorry, but it was really hard to follow and a few spelling mistakes. Plus it's to short. Fix those, and it may be fine. Plus, the name makes no sense.
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ccisawesome (2013-06-04 05:10:05)ok i need to focus on if its hard to follow and once again the tittles dont really make sence tell part 3 or 4 im not very worried about spelling etc and i thought it would be alot longer
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ccisawesome (2013-06-05 04:35:48)spelling this is for sharks not my best story
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imawsome12 (2013-06-05 04:50:53)No, spelling/grammer are also part of the rules. Rember, no parts. Unless it is like a book series.
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"Help!!" "help" was the only thing Zac could hear as he aproched his house"Help!" sounded his wife, he began to run to his house, just meters away. Zac slamed open the door"Brandy!Brandy!!"yelled Zac. He ran to the kitchen and froze into a cold, heart breaking state of shock, staring at his wife, blood all over the room, a knife in her neck."Ouch!!" Zac yelled as his eyes became blured, he fainted to the gound lastly to her the vocies of a group of men, than nothing.