MeNobody14 (2013-07-30 13:50:08)

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This is crap. The storyline is terrible, there are no true characters, and the punctuation just plain sucks.

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-30 14:57:15)

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Spelling: BAD
Grammar: BAD
My understanding of it: TERRIBLE
Originality: BAD
Plot: TERRIBLE

Overall total: 2/10 TERRIBLE

ConnorRonnoc's Comment:
Alright, go read a real book then come back. Squirtle and Shannon are only pitying you.

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FluffehSummer (2013-08-13 06:11:43)

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Total crap......Your mother should be ashamed. This seems like a 8 year old typed this. Lack of punctuation disgusts me.
Not scary,Too short,Lack of imagination. You suck at this. Go back to school and practice writing

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