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The Dark Reshiram

Started by Squirtlemaster
(2013-06-30 02:10:59)

-.N.- (2013-07-19 09:11:58)

I Never said that >:U

I won't rot.

MeNobody14 (2013-07-19 16:36:40)

^Lawl.

It's time for review, kiddo!

ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 18:14:37)

^ Please don't make another one. Please. Not until you've improved your story writing.

bite za dusto

MeNobody14 (2013-07-23 18:25:27)

^She already has. -.-'

It's time for review, kiddo!

ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 18:33:50)

^ She's already made another one?

bite za dusto

ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-24 04:58:47)

^ Sorry Squirtle It just looks *waves hands around* crammed.

bite za dusto

ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-24 05:10:24)

You need a Grammar lesson instead od doing this:

Said Bob.I then ate cheese.

You do this!:

Said Bob. I then ate cheese.

It's the same with exclamation and question marks as well!

bite za dusto

3DLuigiMario (2013-07-25 20:50:41)

You just need to be a little bit more descriptive. Other wise you've greatly improved.

Lord Dimmy!

[IMG]http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/t/aticum.gif?8[/IMG]Dimentio (2014-07-10 09:59:14)

I'm the smart one~

3DLuigiMario (2013-07-25 21:43:54)

Oh.

Lord Dimmy!

[IMG]http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/t/aticum.gif?8[/IMG]Dimentio (2014-07-10 09:59:14)

I'm the smart one~

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