diazbro9 (2013-07-02 21:51:30)

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WARNING!
This story includes violence and strong language.Not recommended for young children.Remember,THIS IS FICTIONAL


7:30
March 5,1998

Main Character's name is Alex

Ahh... I'm going to check out the woods with Jane(my wife) and my little John(son).This is really great.Enjoying time with my family.My son has always wanted to see the woods ever since he heard about them and since its his birthday,we've decided to stay the night here.We walked down the trail,deep into the woods.On the way we heard strange noises.It was just a animal.We walked exploring the woods.My son enjoyed the scenery.We looked up at the sky.Sunset is here.Decided to set the camp now,didn't want to get lost in the woods.After all,I don't want to end up like the... people who were... umm... killed... anyways I went to sleep in a small tent.Jane and John went in a different tent.

1:25
March 6,1998
I'm sleeping,having a strange dream.I'm 9 years old,walking down a road in the city ... a strange figure watches me from a dark alley.I'm getting scared.I walk faster.He gets out and follows.I turn around.He is even closer.My heart is pumping really quckly.I race down the endless road.I turn around,he is right ther-AHHH! I wake up sweaty and frightened.Scared from the nightmare.I stand up,go outside and check the tent.They're not there!

To be continued,on this thread.

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diazbro9 (2013-07-02 22:12:00)

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If this is liked by users,I will continue this.

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Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-03 00:02:20)

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Um.. It's pretty okay. I don't get if it's ghost or a killer or aliens, There isn't much of a theme. I am guessing you're newer to story-writting. 3.9./10.10.

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diazbro9 (2013-07-03 02:33:40)

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SLENDER MAN!

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-05 18:21:05)

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M's review:

Same thing for every thread..

Capitalization.
Punctuation.
Spacing.

Fix it.

Becka's review:

Ehh.. What he said, 'cept nicer.

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