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Nightmares From Brown's Creek Road:The Fireball

Started by bulldogg
(2013-07-04 19:38:08)

Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-04 23:21:04)

0.0/10.10 Seriously? An orb from a dead pig? No offense but this is crappy. You need to put paragraphs, And the story-line is horrible. I am sorry if I offended you.

jEsUs ChRiSt

MeNobody14 (2013-07-05 02:33:24)

^Don't worry, If that didn't, this will.

Crappypasta. Spacing, capitalization, and punctuation. Fix it, Now.

It's time for review, kiddo!

MeNobody14 (2013-07-05 18:05:34)

^Really happened?

Get a life.

It's time for review, kiddo!

MeNobody14 (2013-07-05 18:18:45)

^#LolYouSureCaredThisTime.

It's time for review, kiddo!

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