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Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-08 05:07:14)Um... o-e Sorry but this is bad. I am not trying to hurt your feelings... But yeah.. 2.1/10.10.. Your story just really lacks a good storyline and originality.
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3.5/10.10 Needs more work. I think you need give your stories a little more time to really suck in the story. I think you should make a part two but just try to make it more lengthy.