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MeNobody14 (2013-07-20 02:33:18)Decent story, but a little to familiar, if you know what I mean.
It's time for review, kiddo!
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Not many have heard of the spiky haired kid with a name that strikes fear into both children and adults . I'm here to shine some light on the dark story of Smoky...
Samuel Rodriguez was a young 5 year old kid who wasn't very popular. he only had a few friends and he hated his school. It was such a shame. He never had a chance to prove his worth to his fellow students. He liked different things than the other kids and was considered an outcast.
He was born unexpectedly and was called a human mut. Even worse, he was born near LakeWood City, so he was always paranoid about the fabled Slenderman. His mother committed suicide because she couldn't handle the embarrassment of being a single mother (her boyfriend ran away) and that her only son was such a humiliation to her, and even worse, Samuel's foster parents were drug addicts who knew only how to neglect.
One day, Samuel had finally snapped. During his 1 hour a day out of his dog cage, he killed his foster parents and left to never look back. From then on, he was just an outcast.
On March 10, 1991, a kid named Frederick and his parents came. They were kind enough to take him in, though it was a questionable move. Their last kid that they had was spoiled, and when he didn't get what he wanted for quite some time, he was furious and promised that one day he would kill them and get what he wanted. They just shook it off.
After 3 months at the house, Sam was finally fitting in with other kids. He was happy for once in his life. They move far from LakeWood City so that Sam would feel comfortable. He and Fred where such good friends. Sam always thought of how much better his life became.
On the fateful day of June, 17, 1991, Sam heard a strange noise coming from the front of the house. Since the kid (who's name was John) didn't know that his former parents had a new kid, John left Sam's room alone, thinking it was abandoned. Sam looked from his room to see that John had threw a Molotov in the parent's room and in Fred's room. Sam couldn't believe his eyes. He sped out after grabbing a knife and stabbed him until he saw that kid choke on his own blood. Then he grabbed the last Molotov and burned him into ashes. He stated these words very slowly. I kill without a choice, but I show no remorse, and the next person I see will die...
Samuel's face had always looked the same since that that very day. Spiky haired and burned faced. From then on he was known as Smoky, and his whereabouts are still unknown. He kills children just as John killed Fred. He has no remorse for his actions and kills without warning. Lock your doors, but you can't keep him out. He still says the same word from when he killed John. I killed without a choice, but I show no remorse, and the next person that I see will die...
Very gory, I know, but that's how the story goes...