spadeguy (2013-07-20 23:22:54)

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This is now the official thread for User. After some well needed breaktime from writing I'm back, stories will be released on a day to day schedule. If you ever have any ideas, please don't hesitate to tell me.

Abridged Story so far!

Shane logs into his favorite virtual reality MMORPG. After selecting pirate, he accidentally sets off an event causing a pirate battle. He is held prisoner of war for about 15 seconds because he soon teams up with a bandit-inventor named Gia. Together they break out, but not before Shane gains special powers from a mysterious artifact. Shane then gets to town, and immediately leaves. In a field, he begins a fight with Raid, a marine with arrow skills that prove to be more than a match for Shane. He is saved by and meets Gias sister, Jasmin who's a skilled assassin. They escape, and head off. Eventually they arrive at a bandit town where it is revealed that Shark, the bandit who killed Gia and Jasmin's families, is currently residing. During the fight, Shane discovers that Shark has the ability to control and fuse with water. Raid catches up with the group and together they defeat Shark. During the fight it is also revealed that the artifact hasn't completely fused with Shane and during it's progress Shane has turned to rubber, but is still able to move. The group sails off to nearby islands, and Gia gets the help of Shane and Jasmin to build a better ship. A WAAAY better ship. After learning new techniques, Gia also begins creating a crew of droids.

Next time! The crew sets off, for the great seas!

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spadeguy (2013-07-21 23:36:59)

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Set Sail! The Aquatic Labyrinth!

Hood up?
Check.
Crew on deck?
Check.
Shoes tied...
Check.
Oh wai-
*boing*

I tripped and bounced high into the air, then landed again. Thank goodness the crowd was focused on Jasmin and Gia. They've been praised, turns out nobody's been able to break out of prison here. This town also loves pirates. Well except for the Marines... and traveling bandits. The new crew of droids is working like a charm!

"Shane hurry up!" I heard Jasmin scream from the deck of the ship."WE DON'T HAVE ALL DAY, AND THE MARINES ARE COMING!"

I felt a hand grasp my arm. I tried running but the grasp was too strong, and my arm just stretched. I jumped and pulled my arm, but so did the mystery guy. He yanked me, and I flew towards him. He seemed to be wearing a mask that altered his voice. He punched me in the chest and I flew towards the ship... then immediately back towards him. Dangit! Why is his grip so freaking persistent...

Jasmin and Gia sat comfortably at the ship, but soon I was hit far enough to catch their attention. Mainly because I collided with Gia. Jasmins main reaction was to grab my face, and then she asked what happened.

"Mmrrrfmrfmrrm" I managed to utter. She handed me to a droid, and then jumped on my rubber arm. She began running down it. The droid let go, and I'd had enough of mystery guy making me a human paddle-ball. I grabbed the ship, and that arm began stretching. When I reached mystery guy, I wrapped my head around his waist, and he punched my chest. I let go of the ship and I could hear the sonic boom as it collided with the guy. My head was stuck... I pulled him back along with it and together we flew onto the dock nearby.

Jasmin began running up just as I made it to my feet.
"Sorry!" she said, "I just saw some apples in the store and... what's that?"
Jasmin pointed at the mystery guy, and then her expression got serious. She pushed me back, and unsheathed her katana.
"This is my fight..." she said...
"So don't stop this!"

She quickly dashed forwards and swung her blade. A large blue streak whipped through the air. It hit the figure directly and knocked the mask off of mystery guy... or girl?

So when mystery looked at his mask it was shattered by the thingy. Then I noticed... mystery guy was a girl... oops.

"Jasmin? Long time no see. Unfortunately, your trip ends here. I'm here to end your career, and tha-"

POW

One straight to the face. Jasmin roundhouse kicked her off of the docks, then ran towards me, and sung me in circles. She let go, then jumped, halfway towards the ship she used me as a boost. I fell down and burst through the side of the ship, which fixed itself immediately. Suddenly I felt a strange disturbance. I got up and looked out of the window, and to my surprise, we were moving EXTREMELY fast. I rushed above deck.

"GIA WHATS HAPPENING?" I screamed. "WE'RE REALLY GOING AREN'T WE!?!"

She took me inside, and smacked me in the face.
"You know I could hear you normally right?" She began as I nodded,
"Anyway, we're headed for the Aquatic Labyrinth. It's a very complicated series of islands, and we'll have to shoot straight past all of them. I think you know about the Relic Islands don't you? Well we're gonna get all of them. On that island, I met a guy named Yashua..." I looked off. Yashua? The same one that... no...
"He told me that my captain," she looked at me, "was supposed to finish the puzzle. I'm not sure what that means, but I've heard that place has the fabled Blackprint."

The puzzle... what does it mean? Why is it so complicated. Yashua couldn't be that good. To be in two places at once... he had to be a user then. Maybe he was stuck too...

Hey you. "Majestic captain of the sea". Shutup. She's almost done talking.

Thanks for the heads up freak.

I looked back up, just as she finished talking.
"I'll help you get the Blackprint. Wait, I always wanted to do something. All sails aren't up are they?"
She shook her head.

I walked to the deck, and stopped all activity. All sails were put down. I stood on a barrel.

"GUYS! Thanks for all the help. This won't be an easy task. Let me just tell you, we all won't make it there." Jasmin and Gia stood on top of two crates next to mine.
"Okay! RAISE THE SAIL! LET'S GO! SET COURSE FOR!"

THE AQUATIC LABYRINTH!


So... they're officially off. You have NO idea how long it took me to come up with the idea for an aquatic labyrinth... even then it's basically a clone of the Grand Line. Okay then! See you with a new chapter tomorrow!

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-22 01:03:10)

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I just have a few things to say about this thread:

Water dungeons ALWAYS suck. No acceptions.


Except for (maybe) this. -b

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spadeguy (2013-07-22 01:44:26)

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too true dude! Too true...

Well ironically I'm not really planning on doing any underwater fights. Too much "writing skill" and I'm somewhat an amateur...

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spadeguy (2013-07-22 01:46:18)

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Oh, and the Aquatic Labyrinth is basically just a large maze of jet streams winding around and through all the islands and stuff. Actually, I'm gonna get more "inspiration" from One Piece...

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-07-22 08:48:38

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spadeguy (2013-07-22 13:11:53)

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Go for it!

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spadeguy (2013-07-27 04:26:53)

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I actually gave up on this for Arena of Legends... hm... well I might try and reboot this... I dunno...

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AceTrainerJMB (2013-10-23 00:29:33)

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Get inspiration from One Peice?OH PLEASE this IS One Peice!

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