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MeNobody14 (2013-08-18 03:25:30)You are getting sloppy, Belle. Proofread it, please.
Also, when using Italics throughout the entire thing, instead of using caps to emphasise, simply use normal text.
Example:
He ran around in circles, never actually expecting to get anywhere.
See?
It's time for review, kiddo!
Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-18 22:34:19)Excuse me? I am not trying hard on this I was bored & on my 3ds & I decided to start on a love story. So please don't be so harsh on something that was just made out of boredom
MeNobody14 (2013-08-19 03:35:47)^That's another thing. "&" marks are for names. You don't use them when people are speaking.
It's time for review, kiddo!
Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-19 04:56:09)I use & all I want, All that matters is that I spell correctly now go away & stop bugging me all the damn time
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