I feel the cold wind blow across my face as I stood on top of the mountain. Snowflakes fall all around me, "I would've liked these if I wasn't here such a long time" I thought to myself. I'm standing up here on the mountain, my stomach swimming with guilt. "Guilt. You want to know why I have guilt?" I say to the boy, who's around my age, next to me. "Uhh sure, but it certainly came out of nowhere..." the boy replied.
"I'm guilty because.... a while ago on a boat, I.... I killed my friends pet" I say to the boy. A single tear came down my cheek. Not a lot of people knew about this, but I couldn't stand my mother finding out. "I'm Gold, by the way" the boy says to me breaking my chain of thought. "Yes, what about you?" I say to 'Gold' "I'd like to fight you" he replies. "Very well, I..."
"....am Red of Pallet Town" I say to him.
The End
I know it's bad, I'm not so good at writing stories in this way but yeah.....
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ConnorRonnoc(2013-08-20 11:27:00)^ OH NOES!!!! YOU GUESSED DA ENDING!!!!!
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ConnorRonnoc(2013-08-20 12:51:02)EVERYONE KILL LINK FOR SPOILING THE STORY!!! >:U
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I feel the cold wind blow across my face as I stood on top of the mountain. Snowflakes fall all around me, "I would've liked these if I wasn't here such a long time" I thought to myself. I'm standing up here on the mountain, my stomach swimming with guilt. "Guilt. You want to know why I have guilt?" I say to the boy, who's around my age, next to me. "Uhh sure, but it certainly came out of nowhere..." the boy replied.
"I'm guilty because.... a while ago on a boat, I.... I killed my friends pet" I say to the boy. A single tear came down my cheek. Not a lot of people knew about this, but I couldn't stand my mother finding out. "I'm Gold, by the way" the boy says to me breaking my chain of thought. "Yes, what about you?" I say to 'Gold' "I'd like to fight you" he replies. "Very well, I..."
"....am Red of Pallet Town" I say to him.
The End
I know it's bad, I'm not so good at writing stories in this way but yeah.....