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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 18:05:04)Aura Land of Dreams.
"Ughh...what happened to me?...Were am I?..." The girl wondered to herself. She slowly opened here eyes to see a man im what looked like royal garbs. "Who are you?" said the girl groaning. "dont worry about that now you need rest. We'll talk later," and with a snap of his fingers she was asleep.
She woke up in what seemed like a second later but something told her it was longer than that. She looked around and saw the man from before facing a window. "your up. thats good. Come here let me show you something," The girl walked over to the man. Once again he spoke, " I know you're probably confused but first may I ask your name?" She was surprised by his politeness. "my name is Samantha but everyone calls me Sam," she answered. The man nodded, "Well then Sam, I am prince Matthew and allow me to show you something amazing." With that he pulled open the window to reveal a world straight from here imaginations. the ground floated like islands in the air and the place carried a mystic beauty about it. Sam was worried though, this wasnt possible. "were am I?" she asked the prince. "Sam welcome to my kingdom, Welcome to Aura Land of Dreams!"
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 18:06:11)Here's part one and please help support this story and pm me if ypu have suggestions or extra coments ect.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 18:10:49)Matthew Johnson
"what?!" Sam yelled alarmed. "Were's earth and why the heck am I here?" The man held up his hand and remained a calm figure, "you're still on earth Sam calm down and let me help you." Sam nodded. At least he was a nice person. "How can this be possible if I'm still on earth?" she asked confused. "This whole land is were dreams are reality and you have somehow found a way to come to this land. I'm afraid i have no idea how you came here," He answered.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 18:18:39)this is a creepasta/story forum. it doesnt HAVE to be a creepypasta. This is just a normal story
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 19:34:30)"what do you think i should do?" Sam asked. "hmmm if it were me I'd go for a walk and see if you can think of anything. Feel free to ask for anything you need and you can stay here when your tired," Answered Matthew. "Thanks Matt," And Sam walked out the door.
Sam laid in the grass looking at the peaceful sky trying to rember something that could help her. She didnt notice that a man walked up behind her. "you seem troubled by something," said the stranger. Sam stood up and examined the visitor. He was tall and wore black clothes wimilar to what a ninja would wear in qn anime. His hair was an imposible shade of white and his red eyes seemed to look through her head. "I'm Sam and I seem to have gotten myself trapped here and I don't even know how I came here in the first place," she said to the stranger. The man nodded and said, "Welcome Sam. As for your problem I will only say this. Aura is a strange place and she is in danger. Time will tell if you're here because of an incident or because of fate." After finishing that sintance he simply fanished. Sam stood there confused and walked back into the palace. She thought to herself, "well no-name you certainly are strange but thanks."
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 19:36:08)I know I'm updating very fast and that's only because I already have a lot done so until everything is up most of the story will already be done or at least the first part
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 19:44:07)Sam soon found Matthew sitting on a throne reading a report she assumed. She asked, "Excuse me your highness? I need to ask you something." Matthew looked down and smiled. "Please call me matt it's easier for everyone. So what was your question?" "Well do you know of a man with white hair red eyes and looks like a ninja? Also is there any thing that's wrong with Aura or something?" Matthew seemed shocked. "There's no so man that lives here and actually there is something amiss. Follow me," He said as he led them outside.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 20:00:31)Matt led them across several floating island and brought them to a field. Sam looked around shocked, the area around her feat and the islands near her were gray and covered with red grass. "what happened here?" she asked with a hint of fear. Matt sighed and said, "Aura is the land of dreams....And when there are dreams there are also nightmares. They go to a place called void. Recently Void's corruption and fear has leaked into our side. Unless something is done than we are doomed and then no more dreams. Only nightmares" He finished with a grim tone.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 20:24:26)Sam looked shocked. "you mean that this whole place will be gone?" Matt nodded "yes. and if that happens my people and I will die. Aura and it's people live off of dreams and if void's power gets to strong and shuts off the dreams we will slowly die." The sound of this made Sam sad. She was trapped here but she didnt want them to die. She patted Matt on the back, "Well then lets go stop it then!" Matt looked up at the stranded visitor to his dying kingdom. He knew that hope was finally here and maybe he wouldnt have to watch his people die.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 20:25:15)After ariving snack at the palace Sam comtemplated on what to do. She knew she had to help but she didnt know how. Just then she heard a knock on her door and saw prince Matt with some golden armor on with a sword on his back and a staff in his hand. "You need to get some supplies if we're heading to void," said the prince. "Oh yeah sorry im just a little nervous anout this," Admited Sam. Matthew smiled and said, "dont worry you'll do fine and I'll protect you." Sam had began to admit that she liked her new friend. So sam followed matt into the storage room were she looked for a wepon.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 20:26:23)It had been nearly a day since they left the palace. Sam had chosen a strange katana and a few kunia as wepons. "Were are we exactly Matt?" asked a tired Sam. "oh this is known as the unfinished lands. This area used to be inhabited by my people until they, the buildings, and even some of thr color of the area just disdapeared." said Matthew. "strange..." replied Sam. "Strange indeed," said a familar voice. Sam and matt turned to see the mysterious man that Sam had an encounter with earlier. "Hey ninja dude why are you here?" asked sam. "You can call me Shadow and I came with a warning to you both," replied the ninja. Matt grew uneasy at this coment. "What do you mean shadow?" Shadow then turned to the prince and said, "Well your highness just because She was brought here to save Aura doesnt mean she will succeed. Fate can be changed and the Nightmare's are a strong force. I warn you your majesty that your life may be given up for a usless cause or maybe you will survive for a worthy one. Only time will tell so ask yourself. Do you fear death your highness?" The silence hung in the air like heavy fog when Sam spoke up. "Dont worry shadow it'll be fine. Why dont you join us?" Shadow then replied, "I have my own stuff to attend to so good bye and good luck," and with that he vanished once again.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 20:27:46)Sorry I still have a lot more done ill post a few more parts today and then the rest tomorrow and finally updates will come when I get the chance
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 20:28:32)As the sky turned dark Sam and Matt decided to set camp. "So how much longer till we reach void?" asked Sam. "tomorow unless something pops up. But I need you to promise that no matter what happens you stay safe. Void is a dangerous place and you could die there. As long as dreams keep feeding into Aura I will be reborn if I am killed. You however are not so lucky." said the prince. Sam looked at the prince and smiled, "Dont worry about anyone dying we'll be fine. Cheer up this will be easy," said Sam. The prince nodded. "Alright I belive you. Now lets get some rest. It'll be a long day tomorow." Matt then laid his head down and fell asleep. Sam yawned and soon went to bed herself.
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ZWhiteKnight (2013-09-07 20:29:05)The next day Sam and Matthew arived at a floating cliff high above a black stain in th blue sky. "Alright all we got to do is jump into that hole. Ready?" asked matt. "Yup. lets go!" then sam jumped down into the darkness. Sam and matt landed on a black platform with Shadow standing in front of them. "How the heck do you do that all,the time?!" asked Sam. Shadow ignored the question and said, "Looks like you made it. Good, now see that giant black building? that's your target. However its protected by a barrier. In order to bring the barrier down you need to destroy the generators that power it. There's a total of 5 and they shouldnt be too hard to find. I will return when im needed." Once again Shadow vanished. "I wonder who he really is...at least he's on our side," said the prince "Yup lets go," said sam and they set off into the nightmarish world.
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Hey Sorry i havent been posting much but im now back with this new story. I did post a version of this a year or so ago but it was bad so here is the remade version which is way better and this will continue until the end. I hope you enjoy.
special thanks to my own dreams for giving me ideas lol ane also thanks to sammeh13 for the support and prejudging of the story parts before i post them