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Bean (2013-11-15 23:28:47)(3) Bug Catching!
Jack and Sarah have ran, until they find this.
*Jack throws 2 Pokeballs at them while sneaking*
Jack: I CAUGHT Scatterbug! And Caterpie!
David: Oh look, loser and his girl. Eh? I've already evolved my Fennekin! 2 PokeDex entries pretty quick!
Jack: I have 4!
Sarah: You can have my Pokemon. 7!
David: Oh. Oh... ZANE, loser and his girl have 7 Pokemon. 7 Dex entries.
Zane: WHAT?!
Bean: Go Magikarp!
Zane: Pfft. *Laughs*
*Magikarp evolves*
Jack: 8 Dex entries! Gyarados, scare them off!
Zane & David: AAAAHHH! *Runs*
Jack: Return, Gyarados!
Sarah:
Good one! ???: I was hoping to steal it as a Magikarp. Too bad.
Jack & Sarah: *Laughing*
Jack: Anyway, Fennekin is in the first box. According to my PokeDex.
Sarah: (I'm gonna like this adventure. =) )
Jack: Look! A Butterfree! Froakie! Tackle!
Froakie: FRROOAAKKIEEE! *Tackles the Butterfree*
Jack: Good job. *Throws Pokeball*
Sarah: ...9
Jack: FROAKIE! Weaken Spewpa!
*Froakie uses water gun*
*Jack throws Pokeball*
Sarah: 10! You know, we could challenge Viola, the bug type gym leader! Should be easy, bug are the weakest types.
Our heroes run into Santalune city, and go straight into the gym.
Jack: Hi. I want to battle.
Viola: Okay, kid. I'll use... Vivillion! 1 Pokemon, no time limit.
Jack: Pidgey! I choose you!
Sarah: Jack, win this!
Jack & Viola: TACKLE!
*Both tackles hit both Pokemon*
*Pidgey starts evolving*
Sarah: Pidgey is evolving!
Jack: 11 entries. I now have a Pidgeotto. Now, use a gust of wind to finish this!
Froakie: Froakie! *Happy and cheers on Jack*
*The 10-minute gust of wind keeps Vivillion on the wall*
Jack: Pidgeotto, now! Tackle!
*Pidgeotto tackles, and Vivillion falls*
Viola: I should go harder. Sleep powder!
Jack: Pidgey! QUICK! Final tackle!
*Vivillion faints*
Viola: Okay, here's your gym badge.
Jack: YES! I got the Bug badge!
Froakie: FROAKIE!
So, our gang decides to explore the city. Find out what happens in the next episode!
Next time: Santalune city
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Bean (2013-11-16 01:11:27)Theme song:
On a journey
Across Kalos
With an objective.
Catch all 718.
And all that are discovered!
I can't do it by myself.
Friends will join me tooooo...
POKEMON!
It's our world!
POKEMON!
We shall defend this world.
From eviiiilllllll.
POKEMON!
We're catchin' 'em all right now...
I might travel across the world.
To catch one of every species.
I will not give up...
POKEMONN!!!!!!!
POOOOKKKAAAAYYYMMMMOOOONNNNNNNN
Pokemon!
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Bean (2013-11-16 01:28:37)(4) Santalune City
Sarah: Jack, I have to tell you something...
Jack: Yes?
Sarah: Oops! I forgot what I was going to say. Sorry.
Jack: HEY LOOK!
???: Now, we have the money. Bye bye!
???: Heheheheh.
Mankey: Mankey!!! Ha! We got all the money in the city.
Jack: Hold on!
???: Last 2 people, time to steal their money for their date.
Jack: Erm...
Sarah:
John: I'm John!
Rachel: And I'm Rachel!
Mankey: And I'm a Mankey that talks!
Froakie: Froakkie...
Jack: FROAKIE! WATER GUN!
*Rachel, John & Mankey fall over*
John: How dare you do that to Team Flare!
Jack: Go, Pikachu! Iron tail on the helicopter.
*Pikachu iron tail's the helicopter*
Team Flare: OUR RIDE!
Jack: Pikachu, thunderbolt!
*Team Flare are thrown into Lumiose city*
Sarah: And there we go. Now let's do shopping.
*Jack goes into a Pokemon stuff store*
Jack: Can I buy 11 Pokeballs, 4 Masterballs, 10 luxury, and 1 quick?
Shopkeeper: Okay. *Gives Jack the stuff* 29 PokeDollars.
*Jack hands over the money*
Sarah: Clothes shop?
Jack: YEAH!
*They both run in*
*Jack buys a blue hat, Kalosian jacket, and black trousers*
*Sarah buys a blue hat, Kalosian dress and black trousers*
Jack and Sarah: Team JS!
Froakie: FROAKIE!!!!
Jack: Anyway, where's the next place?
Sarah: Cyllage city. There's a gym there.
Jack: Then let's go!
Froakie: FROAKIE!
Sarah: (This guy is really awesome... <3)
Next episode: (5) Rock or Water?
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Bean (2013-11-16 02:17:04)(5) Rock or Water?
Our heroes are at Cyllage City.
Sarah: Jack, have a strategy planned for the Rock gym?
Jack: *Points at Froakie*
Froakie: FROAK!
Grant: Hello. Are you here to earn the Cliff Badge?
Jack: YES! I would like a 1v1 match.
Grant: Okay... Go, Tyrunt! Use bite!
*Bite hits Froakie*
Jack: Froakie! Water gun!
It's super effective!
Grant: Another bite!
Froakie: FROA-
Jack: Froakie, hold on! Use bubble!
Critical hit!
Tyrunt fainted.
Grant: Tell me, is that Pokemon using an Everstone?
Jack: Yes.
Grant: Here's your Cliff Badge.
*Jack takes it* Jack: Thanks.
*Sarah, Froakie and Jack run straight out of the gym and find something*
Jack: A wild Geodude & Onix. Froakie! Gyarados! Attack!
*After Froakie and Gyarados weaken the rock types*
Jack: I'll catch Onix, you catch Geodude!
*Jack catches Onix, Sarah catches Geodude*
Sarah: More PokeDex entries! YES!
Our heroes will one day fill up the Dex, but for now, they have a long way.
Meanwhile, though.
John: That kid is gonna get killed!
Rachel: John, look!
John: The Sycamore Pokemon lab? Planning time...
Mankey: Steal items/Pokemon and sell 'em!
The villians are returning soon. Just not yet, we still have other places to go first.
Next episode: (6) Korrina and Mega Evolution
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Bean (2013-11-16 11:30:33)(6) Korrina & Mega Evolution
Sarah: I heard you get TM98 & the Rumble Badge at Shalour Gym. But first, let's head to a Pokemon Center.
Jack: Okay.
Our heroes walk into the Pokemon center, and get a nice suprise.
Nurse: Hello. Would you like a Torchic with a Blazikenite?
Jack: Yes please. What does the stone do?
Nurse: When you fully evolve Torchic, you'll see. It'll evolve him further.
Jack: Okay...
Nurse: *Heals Jack's Pokemon* Okay. Good.
*Sarah, Jack & Froakie walk out*
Now to get the 3rd gym badge.
*Jack runs into the gym*
Jack: I'd like a battle!
Korrina: Okay... 2v2. No time limit. Go, Lucario!
Jack: Go, Pikachu! Use thunderbolt.
Critical hit!
Korrina: Lucario! Aura Sphere!
*The attack hits Pikachu*
It's super effective!
Pikachu; 40 HP
Lucario; 80 HP
Jack: Pikachu! Thundershock!
Lucario fainted!
Korrina: Okay, go! Lucario! Mega Evolve!
*Lucario mega evolves*
Jack: So my Torchic will have a form like that? Go! Torchic!
Korrina: Lucario! Dragon pulse!
Jack: Torchic! Flamethrower!
Korrina: Lucario, close combat!
Jack: Give it another Flamethrower!
Korrina: Aura Sphere!
Jack: Finish it with a final flamethrower!
Lucario fainted.
Korrina: You're pretty good. Here's the Rumble Badge & TM98.
Jack: *Takes them* Thanks!
Sarah: 3 badges! Next up; Coumarine!
Froakie: FROAKIE!
As they walk out the building.
*Team Flare agents are stealing money*
John: Quickly!
Mankey: MANKEY!
Rachel: All the money we need. *Flies off quickly to Lumiose*
Sarah: They've escaped!
Jack: #bad word#!
Sarah: Don't worry. We'll find them. Now let's continue our journey.
Our heroes are going to travel a bit more now. But... What about our rivals?
David: 8 Dex entries! Ha!
Zane: Now we're even with Jack!
David: He would have caught more by now.
*Zane and David walk a bit, until...*
Jack: Go! Pokeball!
Sarah: Go! Pokeball!
*The balls catch Charmander & Squirtle*
Jack: Now! Go! Luxury balls! *Catches Riolu & Mudkip*
Sarah: Go! *Throws Pokeballs at Treecko, Chespin & Fletchling*
Jack: *Catches Pyroar, Sandshrew, Snivy, & Tepig*
David & Zane: They have like, over 20 Dex entries now...
*Jack's Spewpa evolves*
Jack: Return! Vivillion!
Our rivals faint. But our heroes continue!
Next time: (7) Coumarine Gym & City!
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Bean (2013-11-16 22:31:20)My best story yet: 1 person viewed.
-.- DO I HAVE TO WRITE ABOUT PLAZA TO KEEP A STORY LIVING?! Ugh. Annoying thqt.
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Bean (2013-11-17 00:12:32)^ There's other things to write about, like:
RPGs/Pokemon
Sonic
Mario
Slender
Zelda
Megaman
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Bean (2013-11-17 00:41:30)(7) Coumarine Gym & City
Our heroes arive at Coumarine, to face the Coumarine gym. But first...
Jack: Go! Bulbasaur!
Sarah: Go! Pikachu!
Rachel: Umm... ESCAPE! *Team Flare get away with all the stolen money*
Sarah: Those guys are gonna get it next time.
Jack: Hey! I caught this when they escaped! Blueprints!
Sarah: A machine to hypnotize all Pokemon in the city/town/forest!
Jack: For now, Gym time, k?
Froakie: FROAK!
Our heroes enter the gym...
Ramos: Whippersnapper, want a Plant Badge?
Jack: YES.
Sarah: I support Jack, he needs one!
Ramos: Then okay, 1v2 with no time limit, go, Weepin' bell! Use razor leaf!
Jack: Go! Pikachu! Thundershock!
*Both attacks do damage*
Ramos: Sev'rl razor leafs!
Pikachu: Pika! Pika! Pika!
Pikachu: Piiikkaa... CHHHUUUUUU! *Thunderbolts*
Weepinbell fainted.
Ramos: O'kay, here's your badge whippersnapper.
Jack: I HAVE THE PLANT BADGE!
Our heroes run out of the building. And walk in a shop.
Shopkeeper: Want some Pokeballs?
Jack: Yes, 25 please.
Shopkeeper: Okay... 20 PokeDollars please.
*Sarah gives it in*
Froakie: FROAK!
Jack: Froakie, I'll use you in...
Sarah: Lumiose. The capital of Kalos. We need to find Professor Sycamore's lab, first. It's also my home city.
Jack: Come on!
Our heroes exit Coumarine. But what will happen next?
Find out soon in: (8) Prof. Sycamore
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Bean (2013-11-17 20:21:08)(8)Prof. Sycamore
Sarah: Okay, here we are. Professor Sycamore's lab...
Jack: Okay, let's go in.
Our heroes enter.
Lab worker: Hello. Want to see the professor?
Jack: Yes.
Froakie: FROAKIE!
Lab worker: Okay, he's on the third floor.
*Jack and Sarah walk in an elevater, and accidentally press second floor*
Lab worker #2: Hey, two of the new trainers. Here are 12 luxury balls.
Jack: Thanks.
*They now go to the 3rd floor*
Prof. Sycamore: Hello! We finally meet. How much PokeCex entries do you have?
Jack: 35. Caught some of 'em and evolved some but the writer didn't bother writing it since nobody views these stories because people on view Plaza fanfics!
Prof. Sycamore: Want a quick battle?
Jack: Okay! Go! Froakie!
Sycamore: Go, Charmander!
Jack: Bubble!
It's super effective!
Sycamore: Flamethrower!
Jack: Water gun!
Charmander fainted.
Sycamore: Good one... Go, Squirtle!
Jack: Water VS water? Eh? Hydro pump!
Sycamore: Squirtle! Tackle!
Jack: Pound!
Sycamore: Water gun!
Jack: Finally! Hydro pump again!
Squirtle fainted.
Sycamore: Go! Bulbasaur!
Jack: *Uses recovery item on Froakie*
Sycamore: Razor leaf!
Jack: Give it a pound!
Sycamore: Vine whip!
Froakie: FROAK! D=
Jack: Froakie, back over here. Go, Charizard! Stealth rock!
Bulbasaur: BULBA! D:
Sycamore: Give it another razor leaf!
Jack: Charizard! Fire spin!
Bulbasaur fainted.
Jack: Froakie, Charizard. Good job! Charizard, return!
Sycamore: You're a great trainer, Jack!
Sarah: You don't say.
Sycamore: Here, choose an extra Pokemon. Bulbasaur, Charmander or Squirtle?
Jack: Okay, I'll choose Bulbasaur. I haven't caught one yet.
Sycamore: He hates this Pokeball, though...
Jack: Go! Hey, Bulbasaur. Want to travel on my other shoulder instead of in the Pokeball?
Bulbasaur: Bulba!
*Everyone hears explosion*
Sarah: Everyone, go back downstairs! D:
Everyone runs, but...
Rachel: Hmm... The couple of kids are here? Doesn't matter. Go, Mewtwo!
Jack & Sarah: MEWTWO?! D:
Our villians have a Mewtwo. Will our heroes defeat Team Flare?!
Next time: (9) Destructive
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Bean (2013-11-18 00:36:16)OH DAMN, BROKE MY CAPS LOCK, BUT REALLY GUYS, 3 VIEWS, DROWNING, AND NOBODY POSTS?! IS IT REQUIRED TO WRITE PLAZA STORIES?! SRSLY PPL. THERE'S OTHER THINGS!
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Bean (2013-11-18 00:53:59)(9) Destructive
Jack: Oh no. A legendary.
Sarah: Uh oh!
Mewtwo: I will not be beat by these starting kids. *Moves Sarah's body into a cage and locks it*
Jack: TEAM FLARE, YOU #bad word#. LET MY FRIEND GO!
Jack: Where's John?
*John runs out with a load of Pokemon and stuff and places it in the helicopter*
Sarah: Mewtwo, I hate you...
Jack: Grrrrr... GO! PIKACHU! CHARIZARD! UMBREON! ONIX!
Mewtwo: Pathetic. *Throws all Jack's Pokemon into the lab*
Jack: RETURN! EVERYBODY!
Mewtwo: Might as well take him... *Puts Jack's body in the cage with Sarah*
Froakie: FROAK!
Bulbasaur: Bulba... -.-
Sarah: Bulbasaur, vine whip the chains! They're kinda weak.
*Bulbasaur uses vine whip*
*Cage breaks off*
John: Return! Mewtwo!
*They fly off*
Sycamore: They're evil alright. Jack, Sarah, you two okay?
Sarah: Yeah.
Sycamore: They stole my stuff, destroyed the lab slightly... I trust you two, you two CAN destroy those 2 agents. And their team.
Jack: We will.
Sarah: Next stop; Lumoise Gym.
Sycamore: Wait, what about your rivals?
Meanwhile...
Zane: 2 badges! YEAH!
David: YEAH! TOOK 6 HOURS EACH FOR BOTH BUT, YEAH!
Our rivals are doing poorly. Yay.
Next time: (10) Rival's Life
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ConnorRonnoc (2013-11-18 18:05:25)No offense Bean, but I think the reason your story isn't popular is because it seems rushed, there's not really any plot behind it, it's exactly like the games really, there's not much character development and there's nothing like side-quests, it just makes it uninteresting. I mean, everything just happens exactly as it does in the game, you're already on the 5th gym after like 10 chapters, there's just not enough of things happening outside the game plot, like on my story unexpected things happen, that don't happen in the game/manga/anime, what I'm basically saying is that you need to put your own touch into it, not just copy what's in the game but changing the Pokemon/Characters.
Also, I didn't really want to say this, but recent chapters don't make much sense.
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There is a boy in Kalos, who loves Pokemon. He has dreamed on being a trainer for years. But now that he's ten, he can start his adventures. They start NOW.
Jack: I will be the GREATEST! *Holds plastic Pokeball*
Jack's Mum: JACK! I'd get sleep.
Jack: Kay.
Jack went to bed.
*10 hours later*
Jack: TIME TO GO! *Get's clothes on and runs*
Jack ran and when he got to the stairs.
Jack: UH OH. *Falls down*
Jack's Mum: Be more careful! Anyway, your starter is ready.
Jack: YES!!!!!
*Jack runs to the middle of Vanville town*
Zane: You were chosen too?
Jack: YEAH!
David: Well, we'll be champions. While you go eat off of our asses! *Laughs*
Jack: Grrrr.
Sarah: Okay guys, starters.
Jack: Ummm. Froakie.
Sarah: Wish granted. *Gives Jack the Pokeball*
Zane: I only need Chespin.
David: Fennekin! Go!
*Everyone throws the starter from the Pokeball*
Jack: FROAKIE! *Hugs Froakie* Question, Froakie. Do you like your Pokeball?
Froakie: Froak. *Shakes head*
Jack: Then travel on my shoulder!
Froakie: FROAKIE!
Sarah: And everyone needs this. *Hands the three a PokeDex each* Also, I think I should tag along on one of your journeys. I think I'll go with Jack.
David: WHAT?!
Zane: HOW?!
Sarah: I don't know. There's just something...
Jack: Come on and join me and Froakie then!
Sarah: Kay!
Jack, Froakie and Sarah begin their journey.
(2) Santalune forest:
Jack: Sarah, do you have any Pokemon?
Sarah: Well, I have 3. Battle?
Jack: Kay!
Sarah: Go, Magikarp!
*Somebody hears the word "Magikarp"*
Sarah: Magikarp! Use splash!
Magikarp: Magi. Karp.
Jack: Froakie! Use bubble!
Sarah: SPLASH!
Jack: Bubble!
Magikarp fainted!
Sarah: Okay. Go, Fennekin!
Fennekin: Fenne kin.
Jack: Froakie! Use bubble!
It's super effective!
Sarah: Fennekin! Use flamethrower!
*Froakie moves behind Fennekin and uses bubble*
It's super effective!
*Fennekin faints*
Sarah: Okay, last one. GO! Pikachu! Use iron tail!
*The attack hits Froakie*
*Froakie falls, but get's back up*
Jack: FROAKIE! Use water gun!
*Froakie shoots Pikachu into a tree, and shoots multiple times after that to keep Pikachu in place*
Pikacha: PIKA! *Faints*
Sarah: RETURN! Pikachu. How did Froakie get so good?
Jack: Dunno. Now let's run. We destroyed quite a bit of trees.
*They run away*
Well, that's all for now, wait!
Jack: A wild Pokemon! COOL! Froakie, tackle!
Sarah: A Pidgey!
Jack: Now, use bubble! *The Pidgey takes the damage* Now! *Throws Pokeball*
*The Pokeball captures Pidgey*
*Jack picks the ball* I caught him!
Now that's all for now.
Next time: (3) Bug Catching
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