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A Pirates Last Breathe.
Started by Carmilla
(2013-11-24 04:07:08)
Carmilla (2013-11-24 04:07:08)
This is my First Story Forum so Please, Don't be rude.

It all started on a bleak beautiful night, Jack wrote in his Journal which he kept under his pillow. I had never seen a girl command a ship in all my 23 years of life. But she, She was special. She commanded her crew perfectly. I would know, After all she did attack me and my men. Jack jumped as Agustise ( A-Gus-Tis ) slammed his door open and began shouting. " A woman!! A woman defeated an entire crew of Sea-Worthy men because of your poor judgement, Jack! I should have you hung! " Jack didn't respond as he was shocked at his brothers words. " Agu-Agustis it is not my fault the woman had more canons and more men on deck along with a bigger ship! If anyones it's your fault for not getting a full crew! " Agustis' face turned red in anger at his younger brother. " Jack you're no Captain!! You're a spoiled brat! " He shouted stomping out the room. Jack sighed at sat back down staring at his Journal then looking up at his fathers picture. " Father.. Why am I Captain and not Agustis.. Why am I horrible at commanding a crew.. " He closed his Journal and plaved it back under his pillow unbuttoning his jacket. " I wonder who that woman was.. " He thought lieing down in his large bed. Jack slept for Three hours before hearing his crew shouting. He jumped out of bed running upstairs not bothering to put his formal clothes back on. Jack froze when he saw the woman who had attacked him earlier that day. " Woman. State your proper name! " He yelled pulling a sword out the crews bucket next to him. " I am Katy Jones. " Jacks eyes widened as he began to stumble backwards. " T-The daughter of the acursed Davey Jones.. " He began sweating as if he was hot on the brisk cool night. " Yes, The daughter of Davey Jones. I am here to collect my fathers newest addition, You Jackson Everdeen. "

I will continue later.



so they think i wanna die, ‘cause my thoughts are suicide..
bet my coffin would be nice, stud that up with some ice, yea..
JaronTheFireCat (2013-11-24 05:51:51)
This is barely readable. Please change the color of the text to something that doesn't blend with the background?
BigMooney (2013-11-24 08:06:35)
^Should have gone to specsavers...

i can read it...























lol -b
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Carmilla (2013-11-24 17:43:09)
@JaronMC If you can't read it you're blind.


so they think i wanna die, ‘cause my thoughts are suicide..
bet my coffin would be nice, stud that up with some ice, yea..
BigMooney (2013-11-24 17:45:59)
^How did he post then?

lol jk.
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