LaughingJill (2014-01-18 19:09:10)

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This is basically spam.

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ConnorRonnoc (2014-01-18 21:52:54)

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^It's like, 3 sentences long, if you're going to post a chapter of a story, put in more than a few lines.

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ConnorRonnoc (2014-01-19 10:22:48)

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fyi, it's not long enough even for that, if you're going to start a story straight in from a character's POV, you needn't have a prolouge.

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