FluffehSummer (2014-03-19 04:42:01)

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[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/NnSNRUJ.jpg[/IMG]


Yes or no?

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FluffehSummer (2014-03-19 04:42:42)

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I'm sorry its so big I forgot to resize

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minecraft777 (2014-03-20 05:08:29)

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Interesting...very artsy...yet simple... I'll give it 6/10 stars

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TREEhugger101 (2014-03-28 17:11:42)

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Head is too big.
Limbs are too stubby.
Try something more petite and less coarse.

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TREEhugger101 (2014-03-29 19:38:23)

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I know it's an art style, but when you draw, you have to think about the... 'flexibility' of the figure. I used to draw like that when I was nine years old and it looked terrible when used in series.
The shoulders are too small.
The arms start mid-chest.
The shoulders are way too big.
Is the leg bent or just horrifically disproportionate to the other one?
The legs start where the knees should be.
If this thing was real, it would die within seconds of birth.

When you develop an art style, it has to look right. This looks like a twisted form of chibi.


I'm sorry for my harsh criticism, but when you ask for an opinion, you get one.

Tips:

Try to create a rough skeleton of the drawing with ovals and other shapes to get the texture right. When drawing in this style, chunk the hair. Make the eyes slightly larger and shape the glasses at an angle to the eyes.

That's it for now.

Ooh, should I post art tips?

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-03-29 19:42:55

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TREEhugger101 (2014-04-01 00:45:26)

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FluffehSummer-
So, to sum it up, you can draw, but you can't draw well.

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