~Nia~Teppelin~ (2014-05-12 23:47:23)

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Halo Cesicum: A Break into the Celeazium

Chapter one: Wake up Dalton please...

"DALTON, Dalton wake up!" said the mysterious voice, Dalton opens and blinks his eyes repeatedly wondering what is going on. "DALTON YOU HAVE TO GET UP NOW, the covenant is here!" said the mysterious voice again, Dalton said "Ugh, what happened Talaxy?" A.I Talaxy replied"Not the time to explain, pick up your Assualt Rifle and lets get out of here!" Dalton picks up his Assualt Rifle and can clearly see what's going on, he stands up looking at what is catching his eye. "Where are we Talaxy, and why is the convenant here?" Talaxy replies "Were on the S.S Cealezium, I have no clue why the covenant are here maybe a scout ship?" Dalton replies "Alright, mark me to the nearest Escape pod on my HUD." A beep sound can be heard, Talaxy said"Alright its done go!" Dalton runs to the area marked on his HUD, he stops and hides behind a wall covenant are there. The grunts left the Elite alone a big mistake, Dalton sneaks up on the Elite. Dalton assassinated the Elite brutally by putting a knife directly to his eye and breaking his neck. He pushes on by shooting and killing the Grunts, his shield charges back up after seventy five percent of damage. Dalton gets to a safe place pulls out Talaxy and looks at her as she appears, "What was our current objective before I was knocked out Talaxy?" Talaxy takes a deep breath then replies "Your objective was to meet with the Cyz team, find one of our missing Spartans and give me back to my original owner Logan." Dalton stares at Talaxy for a bit then replies "Alright lets move," Dalton puts Talaxy back in his head and fits fine in the A.I slot.

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Super_~_Junior. (2014-05-12 23:50:12)

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Good, doesn't exactly interest me, but it's good. I kind of think it was a little too short. But it's nice.

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~Nia~Teppelin~ (2014-05-12 23:51:28)

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^Just a warm up Chapter

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Aleks (2014-05-12 23:54:05)

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I like it, but there are a ton of grammatical errors that bug me.

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little5 (2014-05-13 01:06:43)

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Pretty cool.

Yey, I'm a spartan.

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GALAXYOFTEARS (2014-05-13 01:20:44)

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Why am I guy in there?

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epicpwner2003 (2014-05-14 00:49:56)

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^ You spelled proper wrong.

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epicpwner2003 (2014-05-14 00:51:20)

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That explains why I don't understand it. I don't play Halo.

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~Nia~Teppelin~ (2014-05-20 07:02:37)

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^IDK

But an add-on it has alot of grammer errors becaused I used a typing app it doesn't correct and I hardly have access to PC soooo yea

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