TheAlexRider (2014-06-18 21:54:38)

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I had just moved to a city called 3dsplaza, and its unlike any city. Its full of towers, colored buildings and rule stones everywhere. On my first day Iwas walking through Red street, I heard a "heeeeeeellllpppppppp" coming from the mayors office! I ran towards it and saw someone(mattttt) pulling the Mayor: Robdeprop into his car! he zoomed off! I instantley ran to SomeLuigi, the mayors assistant. He was playing a game: Ban the noobs, Whitch is you get a "ban"hammer and whack noobs on the nose. He stopped when he heard and then got all the mods together and they made a plan...

To be continued!

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Did you like my first chapter? I will write the 2nd chapter the second I get 2 +1 or I might anyway. The truth is: I love writing.

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TheAlexRider (2014-06-18 22:23:29)

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I wrote this on my dsi LOL

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Super_~_Junior. (2014-06-18 23:18:51)

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I am sorry, this is pretty awful. Why?

1. It lacks detail and plotline.
2. The grammar is bad.
3. A lot of 3dsPlaza stories are un-tasteful, you have to do it right or it seems crappy and not very good.

I give this story a 1.00 out of 10/10.

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TheAlexRider (2014-06-18 23:21:07)

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Thanksfor that. Its my first and on number 2 Il try to improve on thoose.

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TheAlexRider (2014-07-02 20:44:23)

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(Closed)

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TheAlexRider (2014-07-02 20:45:01)

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Button not working? (Closed)

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