Pagliaccio (2014-07-10 19:14:56)

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I am happy to announce that a total of ten OCs were considered to be part of the RolePlay competition.
Unfortunately, half are A-OK, while the others we (the judges) request revise their entries and perhaps consult us on the matter.

The five of you that were chosen to be a part of the contest are:

BladeMaster
xXAliveXx
DannyPhantom
Grimaldo
~Rivaille~

So congratulations. Your OCs are unique and well thought out.

The five of you that should consider revising your entires, for we appreciate your submission but feel they could be presented to us much better, are:

Whiteflame
Ponyo
(.DragonLord.)
NightSerpent
PerfectChaos

We can't wait for the showdown. Thank you all for your participation so far.



--EDIT--
Contestants have two days to do so.

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-07-12 07:47:35

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xXAliveXx (2014-07-11 00:24:45)

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ewe yessssss...

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DannyPhantom (2014-07-11 01:12:44)

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Yusssss.

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NightSerpent (2014-07-11 03:35:00)

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:.Revised Information.:

Charater Name: Maxe (Pronounced Maxe)

Gender:Male

Body:A bit muscular but skinny

Face: He has a condition named Heterochromia, meaning he has two different colored eyes. His left eye is a sad gray color while his right eye is a seablue color. He is never found smiling, so his mouth is always a straight line.

Hair: He has dark brown hair that comes in a small wave, making his left eye partially visible.

Clothings:He has a jet black shirt with ordinary jeans. His shoes are ordinart sneakers which are also black. He has a black digital watch on his left wrist.

Weapons: A supply of knives,a Bow'n Arrow, and the Shadow Weapons/items from the 'Abilities' section. He may also make ordinary items into weapons. (Example: Using a sharp stick as a knife) but only if his main weapons fail him. He only has 12 arrows for his Bow'n Arrow, which are metal tipped. There is a zagged M inscribed in both the knives and Bow'n Arrow, including the arrows.

Abilities: He may transform items and himself into shadows, but it doesn't make him indestructible, he may still die. When I say that he may transform items into shadows, I mean when he holds the certain item and concentrates hard enough, it is transformed.If the item is a weapon, the shadow weapon does more damage to the opponent but not enough to kill them.When an opponent is hit with the shadow weapon, it causes great pain.

Personality: He has very strange personalities. First,Maxe is quiet when he's around strangers. He won't say a word to a stranger unless they're in great danger. Second, Maxe is only serious when he's fighting or on a mission. He rarely plays around, even with good friends. Last, Maxe has a short tempor, so one wrong word to him will make him explode with fury. He takes fighting serious and if one wrong word is mentioned, he won't speak to the person for weeks, months, even years.

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BladeMaster (2014-07-11 04:28:22)

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Great!
I still don't know what we were competing for....

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Ponyo (2014-07-11 04:28:23)

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! Revised information !

Character Name: (Princess) Paisley Delmont

Race: Fire person

Gender: Female

Body: She has a skinny body type. Her skin is a bright orange and is very radiant because her body is made of fire.

Face: She has red gem on her forehead that contains her powers. She has bright orange eyes which matches a bright smile she often wears.

Hair: She has dark red hair which she wears in a messy ponytail. It will sometimes produce fire sparks when she is mad.

Clothing: She has a necklace that has a red gem on it that her mother gave her which has a special power. She wears a long blue shirt that hangs off both of her shoulders, she wears no pants because she finds the shirt long enough, knee high red stockings that have a purple ribbons on them, and finally black high heeled boots. Her clothes were specially made so that they don't burn off her body.

Weapons: A red sword that is on fire that she can summon with the necklace that her mother gave her.

Abilities: She can control fire in any way as possible.

Personality: Paisley is quite....sensitive is the word. She will be very nice but if someone says something she doesn't like she will immediately get angry at them. The only thing that keeps her somewhat calm is her talking fire cat named Flame. Though as long as you don't say anything wrong to her, she is quite nice to you. Though she can be clueless at times.

Bio: She was once the princess of The Fire Kingdom that stayed in the middle of the desert that could only be seen if you had the mark of a fire person. The mark being a red gem on one's forehead. At the time, Paisley was only 14 and she was very unstable. Her father went as far as to put her in a glass vase. The only things that made her happy was the necklace her mother gave her right before she "burned out" and her talking fire cat pet Flame. Though when she was sixteen she was sick and tired of being stuck in the kingdom and with the help of Flame she escaped and never looked back. Flame had done her a favor and used a special fabric to make her clothes that didn't burn to ashes. He learned things everyday from experience and is still learning to this very day.

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Perfect_Chaos (2014-07-11 13:09:37)

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Woah, I didn't even think the judges would even look at mine, I'll update it in a bit.

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(.DragonLord.) (2014-07-11 14:11:18)

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!.Revised Info.!

Name: Nick.

Gender: Male.

Age: Unknown. But he looks like a 20 year old.

Human form:

Body Colour: White.

Hair: Indigo Flaming hair. When he gets mad the flames rises and turn black.

Face: He has flaming eyes A grey symbol on his forehead which sometimes randomly change colour, and making him change into a random type Draconian depending on the colour.

Body: He has a muscular body, he has a six-pack and still has a couple dragon scales from his draconian form.

Clothings: A Indigo coloured mediaval armor thats really sturdy, if he has the complete armor on (So with the helmet and boots) dragon energy will flow trough the armor and the armor will use it to make a illusion and use it to change how things and objects looks but when Nick gets hit by a attack the illusions will disappear. He also has a regular quiver on his back.

Weapons:

The elemental staff of the DragonLord with all kind of moves from many diffrent types, some of the attacks are: Thunder shield (Will create a forcefield made out of electricity around him for 5 sec) Fireball (Shoots a fireball the size i want.) and the last one im telling you is: Rage of the dragons. (Dragon statues comes out the ground and will shoot lazerbeams at you.)

The next weapon is: The DragonLord's Draconian Sword. It has 3 special moves. Shockwave: Electricity gets all over the sword and when it slices with it a shockwave gets created. Land Crusher: He slams the sword on the ground with much power and a fissure gets created. and the last one Elemental Slice: The sword gets surrounded by Fire, Water, Electricity, Vines, Ice, and acid and i slice the target with it

And last: Draconian's bow Has no special attacks but every arrow it shoots gets lit in indigo fire.

Abilities: He can fire a laserblast made out of dragon energy he can firebreath people and he has full control over dragon energy.

Personality: He will not comminucate with any strangers, but he is nice to his friends. He also cares much about his friends.

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-07-13 01:38:10

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Pagliaccio (2014-07-13 18:49:41)

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