MSK (2014-08-17 23:54:26)

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Chapter 1
There was a boy who loved to draw. He drew everything he thought was awsome. The boy needed more red ink or red paint so he went to the store. When he looked at the store he usealy felt happy but this time he felt sadness he went inside any ways. The boy looked around the store looked trashed there was 1 hole in the wall so he looked inside. There was red ink black ink and a note book inside of it he reached in the hole and got the art supplies home. When he got home he was getting ready to go to sleep.

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MSK (2014-08-18 18:50:43)

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do u have to post rude comments i would like a nice comment for once

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Jason2k14 (2014-08-18 18:57:38)

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I gave you advice on your other thread, but you wouldn't take it. You want a nice comment for once, eh?

This is the best Chapter I've ever read, that even my 7 year old brother can top this with more interesting details, and much more explicit vocabulary

You really thought you would get a nice comment?

Try telling a story like this to kindergärtners, because this is like a bedtime story to them.

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MSK (2014-08-19 01:04:53)

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-0- i mean it .ur are saying it in a mean way and im tired of it.

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MSK (2014-08-19 16:26:51)

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EVER HERD OF IF U DON'T HAVE NOTHING NICE TO SAY DON'T SAY IT AT ALL

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Jason2k14 (2014-08-19 16:33:57)

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Ever "herd" of going to school to try to make your Chapter a little more better with some improvement, because man, that is also like a bedtime story to me.

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MSK (2014-08-21 00:36:28)

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this is why i hate my own kind IF U HAVE INTELLIGENCE U WOULD UNDERSTAND

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