Vectrex (2014-09-02 02:14:19)

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Ok, so I'm seeing tons of people going "It was dark and Iwuz at schol and then mi teachyer askecd me 2 + 2 and i wuz lik wut..." and I think it's time we showed these guys how to write properly. If your story looks like mine, Just rewrite or get out of this forum area.

My story chapter 1,

there was a killer at schol one day an he sain 'everyone died' and he goes to each off the class rooms and killed people an suddenly a hero jumps in an he saves everyone including who's die, and then the world is happe and so chapter 1 ends PM ME UR IDEAS GUYS.

And now, what was wrong with that:

I see very many places where there could have been capitalizations and periods and commas, but of course, there is none of that. The chapter is short and while yes, you are allowed to make chapters instead of an offical series thread, don't make them this short, as it just floods the forum. Also, NEVER say 'PM ME YOUR IDEAS IM NERDY3465365!!!1!!!1!!', it just makes you look dumb, and un-original.

Sorry, Tiara88345, but your "Hi . My name is Detective Girl . People call me : Princess . Everyone here are acting very creepy . Even my Parents . They been acting Weird ever since we moved to Florida . They grew fangs . My dad started to grow to 200 feet ." won't cut it anymore.

Gosh, had to get that out of me...

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2014-09-02 09:33:02

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MeNobody14 (2014-09-02 02:17:18)

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Excuse me, but I beat you to the punch by over a year.

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Vectrex (2014-09-02 02:32:36)

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Really?

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AntiChrist (2014-09-02 02:54:20)

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I've made several threads regarding this same issue in the past. It isn't easy to get this particular message through everyones head.

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Fireboy21 (2014-09-02 08:17:54)

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MeNobdys thread about this is better.

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Jason2k14 (2014-09-02 10:23:34)

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^

And plus, you're really desperate for a sticky but this thread isn't worth the sticky request.

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