Tick (2014-09-08 20:08:36)

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So, this is not a chapter-by-chapter story.
What this is a passage from a past written story, and I need some feedback on my writing skill partly because I want to start posting some exciting stories.
So, please read and don't be too harsh:

A passage of - wut m8:
"Uh... Uhm..." Jason muttered, slowly sliding the tips of his finger down the glistening blade, the ends of his fingers tingling delightfully.
"Nice, right?" The female trader had asked, sat lazily on her hand-made chair, shrugging off the cold damp air.
Jason nodded, taking a firm grip on its handle; it had numerous designs the handle and it was shaped in a 'T', in the center being a circular logo of a lightning bolt being absorbed - like a silhouette[sp]. The sword's blade itself was longer than two foot and the hilt was clearly the main study; being that it had a tiny lightning bolt symbol just at the center of the hilt.
"Yeah. Apparently the 'bearer of this sword was a legend.'"
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2014-09-09 23:17:58

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