(ExoticModz) (2014-09-17 15:58:12)

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Chapter One

Once upon a time there was a girl named Tiffany she was going back to her home town Indiana, Alexandria She was happy to be back at her house she got out of her mom’s car and she look’s up at her old house and smiles her mom open’s the door and Tiffany runs up stairs and lays on her old bed.

The Next Day

“Tiffany!” Yells her Mom. “Yes Mother?” Says Tiffany. “Time for school.” Says her Mom. “Okay be right down.” Said Tiffany. Tiffany runs down stairs and grabs her backpack and runs to the car. Her mom comes to the car and gets in and drives to the school. “So are you ready for your first day of High School?” Said her Mom. “Yes I am Mother.” Says Tiffany. Her Mom gets to the School and Tiffany gets out and goes inside the school waving bye to her Mom. Her mom drives away and Tiffany walks into the school and she meets a really cute boy named James he smiles at her and she blushes. “Hi.” Says Tiffany “Hello.” Says James. James could tell that She liked him and he liked her too and so he asked her if she wanted to hang out later that day and she said “Yes I would love too.” James smiles and said “Okay meet u then.” James walked to class thinking about Tiffany. “She’s wonderful!” says James.

3 Classes Later.

“Hey there you are!” yells Tiffany “Hey!” yells James “So what do you want to do Tiff?” Says James “I don’t know what ever you think is best.” Says Tiffany James and Tiffany walk to the park the James ask Tiffany is she would be his Girl Friend and she yells “YES!” James smiles “Well where would you like to go?” Tiffany laughs “Where ever the car takes us.” Tiffany gets a phone call from her mother and Tiffany answer’s it “Hey mom.” Her mom talks back “Hi sweetie how’s school?” “Great!” says Tiffany “Well that’s good!” says her mother Tiffany smiles and walks up stairs to her room she hears the door bell and she runs down stares to see who it is it was another class mate looking for her she walked up to him “Hi Mike!” Tiff Smiled. “Hey Tiff!” says Mike “Hey lol.” Says Tiff. Tiff walks up stairs to her room with Mike behind her. “Welcome to Alexandria.” Says Mike “Thanks!” Says Tiff. Mike and Tiff walk into her room, it has Pink roses on the head-bored and the wall was painted blue. “Nice Room.” Mike says. “Thanks.” Tiff reply’s. After awhile Mike leaves to go home and Tiff lays on her bed. “He’s cute!” She yells. Mike walks home in the dark listening to music. Mike see’s something in the corner of his eye. “What The…?” Mike says. Mike looks at the Wolf looking thing, Mike looks at it for a few… “Whoa, is that a wolf?” he says quietly . It stares at him for a few…Then it growls and Mike walks away slowly. “Easy Now, Easy Now…” Mike walks away very slow. The wolf looks at him then runs away. Mike walks back to his house. He walks in and his mother is laying on the couch, “Hi Hun.” She says with a smile. “Hey mom, I’m going up stairs to look things up…” Mike grabs his Laptop and goes up stairs. He wakes up the next morning, “Mom I’m not going to school…” He yells.




Chapter 2

Mike walks down stairs to see something he never wanted to see….His mother was laying on the floor dead! He rushed over to her and he looked for a trace of foot prints. He went out back and started digging a hole, later that night he carried his mother out to it. “Mom, I’m so sorry!” He started crying. He layed her down into the hole. He barried Her. He got real angry and he felt his body changing, next thing he knew he had all fur on him. He tried to speak but it came out as a Growl. He thought for a second. “Am I a wolf?” He looked around, he saw five or six more. “Who are you?!” he growled at the others. “We are the Five spirits young one.” One of them said. Mike looked around. “So is this a curse?” He said. “Only if you want it to be.” They all said. He Looked around, “Am I really a wolf?” He said Sadly. “Yes Mike, You are a wolf to soon love.” Said the One Spirit.

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LightBlu1 (2014-12-03 02:13:43)

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The grammar, the grammar!
The lack of transitions!
Oh, how it all burns!

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PhoenixDawn (2014-12-03 02:46:31)

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@LightBlu1 I must ask you to leave now. Please do not bump threads. You'll get banned.

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