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Just a plain old story (based on true events)
TwilightWinter (2014-11-14 14:37:58)Tell me more about how you were shopping, doing homework and playing games in the bus.
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darkblade292 (2014-11-14 18:55:33)Yes, I know. I should have included that. Shopping I the city, gaming on the bus and writing this in a free class
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It's Thursday the 13th of November. Daniel looks around the bus. His two friends sit in front of him, chatting away. He takes out his phone and opens up Terraria. He looks up and see RÃona, his crush and the prettiest girl he knows. He looks around and notices that there is only one seat left, the one next to him. He looks over to RÃona's friends (also friends with him) and they wink at him. He rolls his eyes. Everybody except RÃona, it seems, knew about his crush. She sits down beside him, she smiles at him as she sits down. Daniel looks down at his phone as they prepare to go to see a play, but first, shopping.
Daniel sighs. His friends had abandoned him with RÃona and her friends, but RÃona's friends abandoned them as well. They spent the day together, not just because of his crush but also because they had to be with somebody for the day. They walked around the city, RÃona dragging Daniel into any clothes shop they passed, and Daniel dragging RÃona into every game shop they passed. Everything was fine. He didn't even mind that he knew their friends were stalking them around the city. Everything was great. He barely paid attention to the play, he couldn't take his eyes off of RÃona. His crush had developed into a passionate love. Everything was great until...
On the way back to the school, the bus broke down in the middle of the motorway. Cars flew past. RÃona looked at Daniel, worried. "Oh no. What if we're hit? What if we're stuck here? What will we eat? What will we drink?" Daniel starts to reassure her, but her claustrophobia kicks in. "Oh no. Oh no no no. No. Please." She looks out the window. "I could jump ou..." Daniel grabs her hands. "RÃona. Look at me. Look into my eyes. What colour are they?" "H-Hazel" "Good. Focus on them. RÃona, everything will be fine." Suddenly the bus starts once more "See?" RÃona doesn't let go. "I never noticed the colour of your eyes before. You have a beautiful soul." Daniel smiles. "That's just a reflection of yours" They lean closer as...
I look up as RÃona walks towards me. I quickly switch to Serebii.net "Hey Daniel, what geography homework did we get?" He looks into her eyes, into her beautiful soul. "Oh nothing. Nothing at all" he smiles
You know when I said based on true events? Well not all do it
Pronunciation
RÃona: Re-oh-nah
Daniel: Dan-ee-eel