Tachikoma (2014-12-20 10:56:28)

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So I got bored in the middle of Science class yesterday, and I've been practicing my pencil drawings for the past few months, and this is what came out of it. This is a drawing that was originally meant to be Rei Ayanami from Evangelion, but I thought "why not" and turned her into my own character, Setsuzoku Aya.
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It's my first pencil drawing in awhile, so yeah. Criticism would be nice.

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HanShotFirst (2014-12-20 13:42:52)

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The shoulders appear to start too far down, and they don't appear equidistant considering the view is from directly in front.

The hoodie seems to be a bit off to me, but it could just be me on that.

Aside from that, it's actually pretty good.

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Mephistopheles (2014-12-20 15:00:45)

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The biggest problem is the neck and shoulders.

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