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31 Days of Goretober
NintendoDude (2015-10-04 09:28:02)4/10, I was confused on whether Jesse and Mr. Holliston had a homosexual relationship with one another. Make that clearer next time. (:
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NintendoDude (2015-10-04 09:31:39)Also, what the hell is Goretober? Why hadn't Jesse asked the doctor if he could use the bathroom? He does not sound like a reliable doctor.
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Jesse let out a shaky breath, trying his best to force himself upward but to no avail.
He was strapped to the cold metal table, without much wiggle room. He couldn't breathe. Jesse was panicking.
He'd fallen asleep at the doctors office, how on earth had he ended up here? It was dark, and the room was chilly like a winter morning. Jesse's torso was bare, and his messy black hair covered his bright blue eyes.
There was nothing but silence.
And darkness.
But then there was a small noise... like the creak of a door opening.
Jesse attempted to jerk his head to the side, hearing footsteps echo through it the dark room. He heard wheels squealing agaisnt tile floor, like a cart was being pushed, and the sound of soft humming drifted through the area.
Jesse bit his lip, stating up at what of the ceiling he could make out.
"Mister Vaan, you've awoken!" Exclaimed a deep voice happily.
Jesse's blood ran cold.
He recognized the voice of his family's doctor, Mr. Holliston.
Was it Mr. Holliston that had brought him here..?
Jesse gulped, "wh.. where am I.." he managed, shakily.
Mr. Holliston laughed, clapping his hands together. "You're just in the operating room. It appears I'll need to remove your arm!"
Jesse's heart hit his ribcage.
He definitely wasn't in an operating room... no... he was somewhere very different.
He opened his mouth to speak, but he suddenly felt an indescribable a pin shoot through him.
He let out a screech in pure agony, feeling his flesh and muscle rip and tear, his bone crack and break as somethingb had been brought down af full force.
It burned, it ached, blood splattered onto his bare chest.
Into his hair.
Onto his face.
Warm, sticky liquid everywhere. The sharp metallic scent filling the room along side Jesse's tortured scams as his arm was painfully removed from his body.
He lay there, tears pouting from his eyes and blood gushing from where his arm once was attached to his body. The pain was unimaginable. He couldn't find any words to express how it felt. Not one.
And as he continue to lay there, sobbing hard and in pure, agonizing pain,
Mr. Holliston began on his leg.
END
2015-10-02 01:51:32
I paced around for hours on empty,
Jumped at the slightest of sounds.
I couldn't stand the person inside me,
I turned all the mirrors around.